THANK YOU ! sheesh do you how many annoying Yuri/yaoi pairing are in the Good fanfic

this is completely bullshit. You have itachi and jiraiya using metal jutsus. And ransom missing ninja using wood jutsu. Also kisame is known for having one of the largest chakra reserves of any ninja. While Itachi has average chakra reserves

Naruto & Kyubi's banter back and forth doesn't really add anything to the story. It's O.K. in small doses, but not like you are writing it.

In your disclaimer you should have said you didn't own Star Wars because you just pulled some dark vader shit (QGMONEY9 finds kid on the streets to act with him for 5 bucks). “Luke I am your father”(Star Wars theme music plays)“NNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO” (pays kid 5 bucks). “Thanks ”.“Your welcome kid”(QGMONEY9 goes back to typing review). You see look at that dark vader bullshit

Oo

Why do you have the characters say both the japaneze and english versin of the te hniques? Also, why katas? A kata is a set group of mevements mimi king a fught and it involves the whole body.

How the fuck does sakira know anything about seals? Jiraiya is the seals master, not tsunade. And how could seals be used by mednins.?

The next couple of hapters are gojng to be flashbacks huh?

I like this start.

This is an amazing story i only whish you finished it

I was disturbingly reminded of the Annoying Orange.

lol! I really like the way u portray akira! so little people bother using naruto's oiroke no jutsu seriously in a battle!

Wow. this is very good. Can't wait to keep on reading :)

Honestly, I've liked your story better than Shippuden, which makes it all the more tragic that this is a dead fic.

Your characters seem to have more dimensions than the ones in the manga. I like your theme better. Naruto seems to have more at stake here, and is fighting with not only technology but with a way of life that threatens his own. I think that this message is more timely than Kishimoto's stopping the cycle of vengeance garbage.

Over all, amazing story. Your style of writing is much more enjoyable than most fics on the site. I hope you eventually come back to this story.

not a flame but seriously where r u getting the info the five main elements are katon suiton doton fuuton and raiton fire water earth wind and lightning with secondry elements that belong ONLY to kekkei genkai ice metel lava wood dark dust and many others with other elements that can only be used by a jinchuriki such as sand, yes u can make sand with earth and wind but cannot be used truly effectively

i must complain. TOO MANY PEOPLE ARE USING MOKUTON WHEN ONLY THE FIRST HOKAGE AND YAMATO CAN USE IT IT IS CALLED A KEKKEI GENKAI FOR A REASON now that i got that out of my system besides what i just mentioned good stories. it is not a flame it is advice on future stories