Reviews for Black is Our World
Guest chapter 26 . 11/7
Noooooo.. :( They got outside. They could've hidden among the trees. They could've escaped. Why did Ginny scream? :/
Guest chapter 11 . 11/7
The japanese thing was random, but the hole was not unexpected. It was in the riddle of Sibyll, after all. "Mrs. Bill-kun" is redundant - it has 2 honorifics attached to it: an English and a Japanese. Also, you didn't mention her husband's name before that, so I don't think it was entirely proper to say that.
On the other hand, you painted her as a nosey talkative old lady.

Japglish is awkward to read.
Guest chapter 6 . 11/7
I wish they'd thought to use that form earlier.
fexx chapter 31 . 8/3
This was easily the most amazing fanfiction I've ever read. Sure, it was extremely dark, but it was also extremely /real/. It wasn't a completely happy ending; not every character miraculously survived. But that's what made it so great. It was realistic, and it made me feel so much emotion. Reading this last chapter left me sobbing with an enormous smile on my face. You wrote it so fantastically that I almost felt as if I had just won this war with them. You have a gift when it comes to writing and I really do hope you write more in the future. Much love, xx
GraySkys127 chapter 1 . 1/15
Honestly, the cat and mouse sequence seemed to be played out the same each time they 'escaped' accept with the Hermione/Draco escape. However I have cried more in this story than the hole Harry Potter series! And that's the only book I've cried in! You're an amazing author! I would personally love to see a one shot on how this turned out, but alas now it is time to move on from thisnrollercoaster of a fic... Also I really loved dumbles letter it hit home!
Guest chapter 31 . 11/16/2014
weirdo2136 chapter 22 . 10/20/2014
Alicia spinnet? Why did you choose her? I originally thought it was a guy who had graduated from hogwarts many years ago or something...
Maya chapter 16 . 9/28/2014
I cried during this chapter when hermione found their stuff in her bag
Shreyagranger chapter 31 . 8/25/2014
Nooooooo it was so good how can it end!
hmm chapter 26 . 8/3/2014
Good story overall but the whole cat and mouse thing with them escaping just to immediately get caught, over and over and over again got old.
Summer Orchid chapter 31 . 8/3/2014
This fic was so terribly dark, but it ended so beautifully! It was so realistic and heartbreaking. I don't think I've read a story like this one and it was really amazing!
elizabeth chapter 3 . 7/22/2014
I didn't cry, but it was very touching.
Guest chapter 31 . 7/21/2014
yasssss omg I loved this story so much.
Guest chapter 20 . 7/20/2014
lol B, C, D 3
Guest chapter 31 . 7/14/2014
My God this story was really incredible really well written this story kept me reading and make me cry a lot of time good work you are a great author keep up the good work
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