Reviews for GTA: Twin Tales 2
Burt3 chapter 3 . 1/19/2013
Great Story!
Sadistic Fox chapter 13 . 5/16/2005
Hm, nice Hitman reference. Nice reference to Bob as well...
Sadistic Fox chapter 9 . 5/5/2005
The dialogue and storylines are getting a lot better, I liked your explanation of the Love disappearance... What you really need to add if MORE DETAIL. Go into character thoughts, describe the surroundings, explain the character's body language.

Also, you really must start using punctuation in the dialogue. Please please do so.

Also, the characters seemed to be fascinated with Desert Eagles... Once again, a desert eagle wouldn't be a very practical weapon. It's huge, really loud, and extremely powerful. It would literally blow someone's head right off...

Work on those things and keep it up... Later...
MasklessDuckman chapter 1 . 4/25/2005
I was never really a fan of the first two GTAs, I thought that they sucked so I didn't really delve into the story like I did with 3, Vice City, and San Andreas. I don't really know where you came up with teh whole Claude being a nickname thing, but whatever, good piece of writing, just not very interesting to me.
lordmasterkris chapter 7 . 4/19/2005
I don't think you're getting enough reviews on this. I wonder why, because this is a really good story.

I'm particularly interested in the future tale, and I think I can see how they might fit together.

keep updating.

kris
Sadistic Fox chapter 4 . 4/9/2005
Presidential elections don't happen overnight, there are months of campaining before election day. And Claude called the cops heartless bitches, and that Bob wasn't a criminal?

How is pulling a pistol in a bank and telling everyone not to move not being a criminal? Accessory to robbery...

Punctuation.

Cryogenic freezing of prisoners? ...No... That would be keeping the prisoners alive for hundreds of years, we don't want that...

Work on a few things and this will be a good story. Look at my review for your other story for more tips...
Dominus Noobius chapter 5 . 4/8/2005
yaya! a sequel! wonderful start, though has started off a bit plain, without much action. but i bet this will develop into a nother great story! oh, and glad to see that salvatore leone isn't exactly that ruthless and ass-hole like
lordmasterkris chapter 3 . 3/31/2005
Great story so far.

And I also suggest you read GTA felines and also my stuff. Its worth a try anyway. . .

kris
GottyKoby chapter 2 . 3/30/2005
Wonderful! And I suggest you read GTA's Felines and review! _~