Reviews for Xenosaga: The beating of her heart
godofmadness43 chapter 12 . 2/10/2011
oh this is good, read it all up to now, i wanna see some more KOS-MOS x Daemar scenes!
LLaz chapter 11 . 5/15/2009
Dude, excellent story you got here. i've been looking for a good KOS-MOS fic for a while, and you deliver. update soon please. i'm now an avid supporter of your story
Martial Arts Master chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
Fanfics with originally-created characters tend to not get a lot of reviews. But your "Daemar" is growing on me, so I'll review yours.

This is excellent so far, but your biggest problem is that you don't make new lines for dialogue, so your paragraphs look like jumbled messes.
RPFarseer chapter 9 . 9/24/2007
Finally a update for this story. I hope that it will be sooner than the last one. I found these two new chapters to be really sweet and found it to fit perfectly in with the story. Update again soon.
TK-MR chapter 9 . 9/23/2007
...Well done, hope you can update soon. :D