|Reviews for On Your Shore|
| Guest chapter 15 . 1/9
This is a fantastic fic! I love everything about it and everything you translated from the games, from the deep Spira lore to the characters' relationships. Tidus and Yuna's relationship is beautiful and believable and makes me feel soft and warm inside.
I wish you the best with your next update, and I await it eagerly!
| speedythesloth chapter 15 . 12/2/2014
First of all, this is the best piece of literature I've ever read on this site... It's been three fucking years, can't you update!? Your choice of diction is just marvelous, and the plot is thoroughly intriguing. The only tiny thing that gets me is the minor spelling differences in British English (I'm an American), but it gives it a classic quality that further promotes its excellence.
So for fuck's sake, could you come back and finish it? :)?
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 15 . 4/19/2014
I felt like fangirling and screaming! There finally back together and they kissed! Yaay I don't mind that its taken from the game lake scene. I'm also soo in love with that scene it's so lovely and adorable. They're finally a couple. I can't wait till Tidus brings her to His home.
I was picturing Yuna one day saying to Auron that she will move out to live with her lover, but that would break his sanity. XD but I'm all for it!
Well Tidus there goes your I will never marry claim, it flew out of the window just like that
I can't wait or more chapters please update :3
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 14 . 4/19/2014
Crap Seymour will ruin Yuna and Tidus' relationship.
At least Lulu found Yuna yaaay. Who'd guess that she and Auron were acquaintance. At least it'll work in a good way for Tidus and Yuna.
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 13 . 4/19/2014
Things are becoming spicy! Soo who will Auron ask to protect Yuna? Jecht? The irony. XD
So Khimari disappeared and we dot know where, it probably will have some importance in the future chapters.
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 12 . 4/19/2014
You really love Les Miserables or is it just because this story is slightly base on it?
Poor Tidus, at least he finally figured out his feelings! Yaay go look for her boy! Show her off to your old man, go on dates compliment her and kiss a lot! That's what we fans are waiting for!
I wonder where Yuna and Auron went to and why did Jecht start to dream about Braska and Yuna?
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 11 . 4/19/2014
It felt like a lot has happened. Poor Yuna won't be able to see her friends again and especially Tidus. I wonder what he well think if he finds out that Yuna disappears. Well as the saying guess, you'll never know what you love until its gone. Or something along that line.
I bet that fat old guy killed Donna and his boss is probably the one who send the sphere to Auron. Is he also responsible for Braska's death?
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 10 . 4/19/2014
No TidusxYuna fluff or a while? Cries
Well the chapter was nice and as always I e tied the conversations between Tidus and Yuna.
So Dona was behind the stolen spheres of Jecht. How did she know that they're were there?
So Yuna's fortune will tell her that she'll find out about her parents and Rin did recognize Yuna.
Oh man Brother you've put yourself in some trouble, since Tidus has already the hits for Yuna. XD Lulu was right.
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 9 . 4/18/2014
Best Chapter Ever! I loved the part where Jecht went all protective over Tidus and beat the crap of those sphere hunters. Finally they're getting about closer. Also when Tidus bursted out in crying and Yuna consoling him was super sweet, especially the part before Tidis left an held her hands. Damn I felt like fangirling!
So Jecht and Auron had a fight before they deprecated? Was it about Braska's death? Is that also the reason why Jecht returned to drinking?
Wait so Braska met his wife during his pilgrimage? Did his journey take 7 freaking years? Wow what has he been doing xept for getting all the Aeons?
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 8 . 4/18/2014
Another nice chapter and I really like the change of POV into Guppal's. now we can relate to him too. I haven't played FFX-2 or watched the play-through. I only know Paine from KH2.
I watched the FFX playthrough undubbed, because I'm a fan of Tidus, Yuna and Auron's Japanese voice. If only I had a PS2 or 3. But I only have a PSP, Wii, N64, GameCube, GB color, Advance SP, DS lite and 3DS. And I'll have to save my money thanks to medical expenses
Anyway, it was also interesting to see Tidus' jealous side, quite funny how you find it hard to get into Tidus' thought since in the game his thought were quite clear.
I wonder how come there's nothing known about Braska's guardian's? And shouldn't Rikku notice that Yuna has 1 green al beht-eye. Tidus did he also noticed a slight similarity in the cousins.
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 7 . 4/18/2014
XD the TidusxYuna scenes are indeed much interesting, but that's because we all sip them. XD
What a cute way of putting Khimari in there. He because a kitten instead.
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 6 . 4/18/2014
I wish Blitzball existed here too, but that would be very unlikely, since no one can held their breaths that long.
The opening of FFX got me all fangirling because of the blitzball match, too bad Sin interrupted it.
How sweet Tidus watched Yuna all the time and even with his problem on concentrating he still won. That is what you call natural talent.
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 5 . 4/18/2014
No need to compare Tidus' hair with a Chocobo, we have Cloud for that. XD
Jecht really gets easily angry. What happened during the pilgrimage that made him so sour?
Luckily for Tidus he has Yuna so he can forget his dad.
Thought the chapter was uneventful I still enjoyed it.
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 4 . 4/18/2014
Yaay her first Blitzball tournament, she'll have one heck of a time. She can cheer as loud as she can and Tidus will probably take her to a nice place afterwards, as long as Auron won't notice.
I wonder where Auron goes? Visit Jecht?
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 3 . 4/18/2014
Haha this was a funny one. Tidus getting freaked out by Auron. He also swearing he'd never marry, sure just wait until you an Yuna are somewhere in a hidden corner kissing, then you'd whistle differently. XD
At least Yuna's new and exiting life has started.