Reviews for On Your Shore
SeekerOfPeace chapter 15 . 11/6/2016
Again,I'm half ...
I'm curious about the secrets of Yuna's father actually.
SeekerOfPeace chapter 9 . 11/5/2016
You said that Tidus's thoughts about Yuna for his age were unnatural. They aren't unlike mine,in the sense that I don't stray into unclean thoughts. I've recently had a slight crush for someone. Im a teenager so I sometimes have ahem.. urges yet even when I do I'd shield parts of my mind from the burning onslaught it brings. Those parts include her,the same way i do for my family.

meh,perhaps I'm wrong but here iit is my 2 cents of thoughts.
SeekerOfPeace chapter 6 . 11/5/2016
"It's a Hibiscus,it only blooms at night"

Jking...:)Ok I'll calm down now.
The hibiscus is my country's national flower(a red hibiscus to be exact) and as far as I know hibiscuses,red or white do bloom in daylight. I'm not aware of any specific blooming time though and maybe you're talking about a different kind of hibiscus.
charlatain chapter 15 . 10/3/2016
Writer's block? I feel like the you've set up your story so incredibly well, it should practically write itself! I'm so curious to find out what is haunting Auron, who killed Donna, who broke into Jecht's sphere closet, what's Seymour's plans-so many mysteries left to solve! Please don't let it be 10 years!

This was grade-A, quality fanfiction. Some of the best writing I have ever read on this site. Don't give up!
Ashlen the Moonstruck Aquarius chapter 15 . 10/12/2015
This chapter makes me happy... And it's a Monday.
Q-A the Authoress chapter 15 . 9/26/2015
Awwwwwwww. How wonderful.

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'
Q-A the Authoress chapter 3 . 9/24/2015
XD Overprotective Auron was hilarious and adorable.

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'
Q-A the Authoress chapter 2 . 9/24/2015
Hmmm, my guess it's Zanarkand.

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'
Guest chapter 15 . 1/9/2015
This is a fantastic fic! I love everything about it and everything you translated from the games, from the deep Spira lore to the characters' relationships. Tidus and Yuna's relationship is beautiful and believable and makes me feel soft and warm inside.

I wish you the best with your next update, and I await it eagerly!
speedythesloth chapter 15 . 12/2/2014
First of all, this is the best piece of literature I've ever read on this site... It's been three fucking years, can't you update!? Your choice of diction is just marvelous, and the plot is thoroughly intriguing. The only tiny thing that gets me is the minor spelling differences in British English (I'm an American), but it gives it a classic quality that further promotes its excellence.

So for fuck's sake, could you come back and finish it? :)?
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 15 . 4/19/2014
I felt like fangirling and screaming! There finally back together and they kissed! Yaay I don't mind that its taken from the game lake scene. I'm also soo in love with that scene it's so lovely and adorable. They're finally a couple. I can't wait till Tidus brings her to His home.

I was picturing Yuna one day saying to Auron that she will move out to live with her lover, but that would break his sanity. XD but I'm all for it!

Well Tidus there goes your I will never marry claim, it flew out of the window just like that

I can't wait or more chapters please update :3
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 14 . 4/19/2014
Crap Seymour will ruin Yuna and Tidus' relationship.

At least Lulu found Yuna yaaay. Who'd guess that she and Auron were acquaintance. At least it'll work in a good way for Tidus and Yuna.
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 13 . 4/19/2014
Things are becoming spicy! Soo who will Auron ask to protect Yuna? Jecht? The irony. XD

So Khimari disappeared and we dot know where, it probably will have some importance in the future chapters.
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 12 . 4/19/2014
You really love Les Miserables or is it just because this story is slightly base on it?

Poor Tidus, at least he finally figured out his feelings! Yaay go look for her boy! Show her off to your old man, go on dates compliment her and kiss a lot! That's what we fans are waiting for!

I wonder where Yuna and Auron went to and why did Jecht start to dream about Braska and Yuna?
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 11 . 4/19/2014
It felt like a lot has happened. Poor Yuna won't be able to see her friends again and especially Tidus. I wonder what he well think if he finds out that Yuna disappears. Well as the saying guess, you'll never know what you love until its gone. Or something along that line.

I bet that fat old guy killed Donna and his boss is probably the one who send the sphere to Auron. Is he also responsible for Braska's death?
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