Reviews for On Your Shore
hello chapter 15 . 12/7/2017
lovely, i love this tenderness between the two made me blush and smile. (psst btw, its been 6 years, you said 10, only 4 for your promise to be broken haha. but no presure, you write really well!)
AmazingRuin chapter 1 . 7/4/2017
I knew what I was doing when I started reading this. I saw the date for the last chapter, I read the update on your profile from 2012... I knew that it wasn't completed, but I couldn't stop myself. Your writing is just so beautiful, so compelling and raw. I drank in all the stunning words you wrote and dreamt where the story would go next when my eyelids became too heavy to continue reading. And now, here I am. Despairing, because there's been no update for 6 years. It's always the best authors that take ages. I accept that, because it's always worth it. But please, just know, this story is not forgotten and will be pined after for as long as it takes. Thank you for this beautiful story. I hope to see more from you soon.
Guest chapter 15 . 5/13/2017
Well um, you said it wouldn't be 10 years, so...

You got 4 years left :D
SeekerOfPeace chapter 15 . 11/6/2016
DARN IT,KIDS!GET MARRIED OR SOMETHING! Or at least get engaged.
Again,I'm half ...
I'm curious about the secrets of Yuna's father actually.
SeekerOfPeace chapter 9 . 11/5/2016
You said that Tidus's thoughts about Yuna for his age were unnatural. They aren't unlike mine,in the sense that I don't stray into unclean thoughts. I've recently had a slight crush for someone. Im a teenager so I sometimes have ahem.. urges yet even when I do I'd shield parts of my mind from the burning onslaught it brings. Those parts include her,the same way i do for my family.

meh,perhaps I'm wrong but here iit is my 2 cents of thoughts.
SeekerOfPeace chapter 6 . 11/5/2016
"It's a Hibiscus,it only blooms at night"
Me:WHAT LIE IS THIS!

Jking...:)Ok I'll calm down now.
The hibiscus is my country's national flower(a red hibiscus to be exact) and as far as I know hibiscuses,red or white do bloom in daylight. I'm not aware of any specific blooming time though and maybe you're talking about a different kind of hibiscus.
charlatain chapter 15 . 10/3/2016
Writer's block? I feel like the you've set up your story so incredibly well, it should practically write itself! I'm so curious to find out what is haunting Auron, who killed Donna, who broke into Jecht's sphere closet, what's Seymour's plans-so many mysteries left to solve! Please don't let it be 10 years!

This was grade-A, quality fanfiction. Some of the best writing I have ever read on this site. Don't give up!
Ashlen the Moonstruck Aquarius chapter 15 . 10/12/2015
This chapter makes me happy... And it's a Monday.
Q-A the Authoress chapter 15 . 9/26/2015
Awwwwwwww. How wonderful.

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'
Q-A the Authoress chapter 3 . 9/24/2015
XD Overprotective Auron was hilarious and adorable.

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'
Q-A the Authoress chapter 2 . 9/24/2015
Hmmm, my guess it's Zanarkand.

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'
Guest chapter 15 . 1/9/2015
This is a fantastic fic! I love everything about it and everything you translated from the games, from the deep Spira lore to the characters' relationships. Tidus and Yuna's relationship is beautiful and believable and makes me feel soft and warm inside.

I wish you the best with your next update, and I await it eagerly!
speedythesloth chapter 15 . 12/2/2014
First of all, this is the best piece of literature I've ever read on this site... It's been three fucking years, can't you update!? Your choice of diction is just marvelous, and the plot is thoroughly intriguing. The only tiny thing that gets me is the minor spelling differences in British English (I'm an American), but it gives it a classic quality that further promotes its excellence.

So for fuck's sake, could you come back and finish it? :)?
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 15 . 4/19/2014
I felt like fangirling and screaming! There finally back together and they kissed! Yaay I don't mind that its taken from the game lake scene. I'm also soo in love with that scene it's so lovely and adorable. They're finally a couple. I can't wait till Tidus brings her to His home.

I was picturing Yuna one day saying to Auron that she will move out to live with her lover, but that would break his sanity. XD but I'm all for it!

Well Tidus there goes your I will never marry claim, it flew out of the window just like that

I can't wait or more chapters please update :3
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 14 . 4/19/2014
Crap Seymour will ruin Yuna and Tidus' relationship.

At least Lulu found Yuna yaaay. Who'd guess that she and Auron were acquaintance. At least it'll work in a good way for Tidus and Yuna.
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