wow... i realy liked that story _ i hope u write more (especially if it has kagura in it :P)

i love it! there need to be more fanfics with this pairing. it was very tender, much like i imagine a relationship between them might be.

*does the first review tango*

Wow...I really can't believe I'm the first person to review this. What an amazing one-shot...I really liked the twists in it. You're an excellent writer, and I'd love to read more of your work. Keep it up!