Reviews for Perverse Mind
Mika Uriah chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
LOL too funny! great job!
LeahElizabeth chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
I'm glad that you have something written in english. I really liked it :)
kykio88 chapter 1 . 7/18/2005
Hello!

Orale pues es el primer fic de JL que leo y me gustó jajajaj me reí bastante, además de que es también mi pareja favirta. Súper bien!

Byes!
Terry Bogard chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
tu fanfic esta bien malo, porque no haces algo original en lugar de andar sacando tu basura de caricaturas no tienes creatividad
Averroes chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
Aside from the language/grammatical difficulties, it was humourous. But the laughs were diminished by the synopsis. If you had stopped at "what are they doing?" it would have made for that form of suspense used in comedy to bring the 'big laugh'. Referring to "misunderstandings and... suppositions" left me expecting the ending - instead of one big laugh, it was more a matter of repeated chuckling. You might also want to rate it a grade higher, say 'T', as this would both reference the pointed inuendos as well as suggesting something a little more 'adult' might be going on. Keep it up.
lita chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
bueno lo prometido es deuda y ahora que pude logre entrar ala pag y pues te envio las felicitaciones mil y un vecesesta buenisimo el fic sera por mi mente tan m no bueno me gusto mucuho y luego te mando lo estos cosas demis amigas

adios ysigue
Alba Aulbath chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
Though I can tell that English is not your first language, it was fairly cute. The only thing I can suggest to you is that you get someone that has English as a first language to help you edit your story next time. It makes for difficult reading. Otherwise, very cute, though I can honestly say that I don't think Batman is the blushing type - but what do I know? :D
Subaru Sakurazuka chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
Hhahaha, joder!

¿oye, era originario de Inu Yasha? Lo hubieras pueto como era originalmente...pero bueno, estubo bueno, felicidades!

Con razòn se me hacia raro que saliera tan interesante...hahaa jokin

X3

See ya around!
stormcloud-23 chapter 1 . 4/2/2005
That’s a GRAT FIC! You nearly had me for a second thinking the same thing as those two… okay you had me more then a second ! Batman was a work of art… I didn’t know he was capable of blushing, you learn knew things every day!

Speaking of blushing… I did to when I read you dedicated the fic to me as well ! What can I say… THANKS! I meant it!
Mony19 chapter 1 . 4/1/2005
COOL FIC. My mind was somwhere else too for a little while but after a while i realized it was something else.