|Reviews for First Impressions|
| amykristoff chapter 23 . 8/7/2014
gAaaaaaa! i really liked this compilation you've done! i praised you so for making this fanfic i love it!
i thought the story maybe a bit boring at first, like cliche almost but you brought the twists thru
your characters, i was definitely fond on Kurz [esp his antics on the 'book' - got me laughing hard!]] and Melissa's nonstop actions [you go girl!]. and you got to display more S&K's more mature but same LOL moments. Also like that Sousk get to 'roleplay' on that fight which definitely was more exciting than the boring fight of TDD from its enemies.
HEheheh anyway, would you like to consider continuing the epilogue section? its a cliffhanger end[perfect! too] but i'd bet there's gonna be more adventure
| Lunabellla chapter 23 . 5/24/2009
Very good story! I hope you keep writing.
| Envy chapter 23 . 8/8/2007
you have to do another story off of this one, or another epilogue of the epilogue. It's just like another FMP show or something, but if you already have another on out please refer it to me. i love your style of writing, it shows that you did and have put alot of thought and time into this story. It's the best one that i have ever seen, unless more of your work and surpass this, i truly thank you as a credit to the world of writing, for putting so much time and effort into a story. Please feel free to contact me at any time via e-mail with futher updates to your writing, i would be very pleased.
| saihei chapter 15 . 6/15/2007
| Kyle Muntz chapter 23 . 8/1/2006
This story is very good. I have to say that compared to your other works, I didn't like it as much. I prefer your more comedic works., as this one seemed a bit too bland in parts. Regardless, compared to any other author on this site, it was still a great read. Congradualations on yet another great story!
| IcBlue-Dmoness chapter 23 . 5/3/2006
haha! i just loved that ending! a classic. hah. once again, an awsome story, just like many of your other ones!
| Yuri chapter 23 . 2/3/2006
It's great writing, as usual, Dave. :D
Keep it up!
| a1boogz chapter 23 . 12/27/2005
Great work dave. Youre best IMHO.
| BetweenheavenandHell chapter 23 . 11/23/2005
another FMP fic from you and another killer last line, as I've stated before, I love the fact that your stories cover Kaname and Sousuke's post get together life, and Kurz as always was priceless throughout
| KuramaLuvr chapter 23 . 11/2/2005
Wow, such a great fanfic! I really noticed how detailed you were, you really knew what you were talking about the whole time!
One thing that had me confused though, was the M rating, the only higher rated content in here would be the language and sexual hints, but it was still very good. o_o
| KilalaKitten chapter 23 . 10/13/2005
I really, really loved your story! It was very well written and I could tell had some research. I'm glad you finished it and I loved how you ended it! :)
| laura chapter 23 . 9/3/2005
Ahahah. Man, this fic was awesome XD It was really funny, but also really intense... I had to have the dictionary opened because of so many big words I didn't understand XD
Sousuke and the woman harrasing thing was hilarious.. Oh man leave it to Kurz to spill the beans.. I was laughing so hard without actually making a noise (since it's night.. or err early morning and I'm not supposed to be up) when Kurz was saying that stuff. hahaha poor Sousuke XD
The fight on Klyuchevskaya Sopka was awesome. A bit confusing, but awesome. I had trouble paying attention to some of the story though because of so much information into it. I might have to reread it sometime to fully understand it.
Shunya talks too much about dining. I wonder if he's fat or something.. XD Man but he was sure getting on my nerves.. If he would have forced her to go to America at 18 he couldn't do anything to stop her from going back to Tokyo.. Right? But even so, Kaname and Sousuke would probably have their own different lives without prolly even thinking about each other.. eek good thing he let Kaname stay!
Well awesome job! Hope I get to read more from you in the future. Kudos!
| GeneralDragon chapter 23 . 8/10/2005
Great story Dave-D hope to see another FMP from ya soon. Keep up the great work, and i'll keep on reading.
| Ouatic-7 chapter 23 . 7/28/2005
You had me going in the epilogue. Kaname was just annoying but then you mentioned she was actually getting some of Sousuke's choices and I felt much better.
| Ouatic-7 chapter 20 . 7/27/2005
I liked how even when Sousuke is talking trash about women he has difficulty using coarse language. Such a nice young man.