Reviews for Othello
rated k for kool chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
Nice story, though it was pretty confusing to read. Try specifying who you're speaking about when you switch scenes? And maybe separate the paragraphs more?
Also, the characters are a bit OOC.
But nice idea!
TameranianRaven chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
That was cool! But poor Rae. I feel really bad for her.
Ananaka chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
Aw. Poor Raven. You're a great authoress and I love your fics. Again this was extremely original and fun. Except, I thought Beast Boy asked Starfire to help him with Siky... Oh well! nice job!
ff chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
o.0 weird, interesting, but weird, funny, but weird, well, written, but weird, good, but weird.

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ff chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
o.0 weird, interesting, but weird, funny, but weird, well, written, but weird, good, but weird.

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dreamboatdarryl chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
heh. evil kitten. i don't like cats. Go you!
Grey Rain chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
No! Evil kitty! *sobs* That was good, though. What's gonna happen to Waz...Waz...whatever his name is? Is he gonna go back to Trigon? I wanna know!
takuya chapter 1 . 4/2/2005
cute but werid