|Reviews for Tale Of The Loyal|
| Yuna Shophia Swan chapter 5 . 7/25/2015
you have done well on every single chapters so far
you have gone well into detail with the story
what you could improve is when you are spelling you need to be careful and you need to remember to put space in between some the words in some chapters
and i must agree you have done real good, just keep up the work
| LayaYugiSisterSunPrincess chapter 1 . 7/4/2015
This part is do cute
| NowMowKitty chapter 1 . 5/2/2015
| tracy.bushman chapter 10 . 4/29/2015
Will there be another like this story it had touch my heart please will please ...
| YuugiYY chapter 10 . 12/3/2012
Tsk tsk. i dont like horus now
| andysanime chapter 10 . 8/21/2011
Really good job on this story.
| DarkChao1663 chapter 10 . 3/6/2011
Chao- Great plot and story. Aside from a few mistakes, this was very interesting to read.
| nana chapter 10 . 8/1/2009
so sad... i cried...
| ShiftingWinds125 chapter 10 . 8/15/2008
I worship this story! It was both cute and sad! Please write more stories!
| WolfeChilde chapter 10 . 9/28/2007
Sweet but somewhat sad
| lady Alexas chapter 10 . 9/13/2007
oh wow it made me cry so badly
| Angelic Samurai chapter 1 . 5/22/2007
Aww...poor Yugi! But Yami's gonna help him right?
| ShyRaven23 chapter 10 . 12/12/2006
what a sad story. YOU BETTER START THE NEXT STORY PRETTY SOON AND LET THEM ALL GET BACK TOGETHER AND BE HAPPY!
| animeodyssey15 chapter 2 . 11/26/2006
Don't you know what salt does to a wound? I'm not positive, but I'm pretty sure it's very painful to pour salt (even salted water) into a wound. Haven't you ever heard the expression "adding salt to the wound"?
| Crystal F. Flowright chapter 10 . 9/24/2006
That was so sad! But it was good too, thank you for the story, it was nice to read, hope to read more of your work soon.