|Reviews for Penance|
| Rivergift chapter 1 . 1/13/2012
This is so creepy but so good - a mark of really great darkfic! I loved the last line, it sent chills and yet I can see it happening, after all that Draco has done. Amazing.
| vivi88 chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
That's just gross. Good story. But freakin' gross.
| xBloodSplatter chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
Always love a good little fluff story.
| Starlit.Amulet chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
i thought he was trying to be strong and brave or something
but then i read the end
this is pure evil..i love twists like that
| Lord Sia chapter 1 . 11/27/2008
Somehow, justice only makes the whole thing sicker. And for some people, living is the worst imaginable punishment. Never, ever, underestimate the human ability to cause pain and suffering.
| cari chapter 1 . 7/29/2007
omg. this is one awful fanfic. like, not the writing was bad. or the plot. it's good if it's awful for a darkfic, i guess. anyways, very nice job. the details are a bit shocking, and it seems so out of character for harry and hermoine to do those things. but people change.
| MistariaPotter chapter 1 . 7/25/2007
This is really good. But it hurts. It hurts to see Draco so vulnerable. The last part was just...so scary.
| Whackyrach chapter 1 . 8/24/2006
Wow love it- the end is amazing although v creepy.
| CrimsonTears93 chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
OMG this fic is so dark but good. I like the way u ended it.
| Waltz Alone chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
that tongue part really got me. lol 0_0
very ark and freaky and sad and angsty...
well-written! Nice job :D
*shudders reading the last lines once more*
| SugarQuill Cutie chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
oh my F* GOD! this is so twisted, insane, dark, and unbelievably evil. I LOVE IT! The last part. woa. It just sent chills up my spine. You really left me on the edge. so flipping amazing. The darkest of the dark. I love the fact that it's reversed roles. Since usually it's Draco doing to torturing to Hermione. Wow. and the "beg" part, it had me (and probably everyone else) thinking he was being all "stong" and stuff not begging.. the end though... WOW. thats all i can say. wow. It was just so haunting and freaky and.. and.. just
congratulations, this is a really good piece of work.
| NoMoreFanFic chapter 1 . 6/21/2005
one thing I've learned from this story is to never put Hermione in charge of anything but talk... Harry fits in pretty much any situation you want him to be... but the fic is good though...
| BellesNGems chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
WOW! dark fic...sometimes Draco deserves it...but sometimes he's just to good...either way this is a good dark fic.
| prncssktty13 chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
Nice! Like the dark side of one of my favorite pairings. Almost felt sorry for Draco, almost. I can see how these two ended up with these feelings yet I can still imagine the two walking out of the room and struggling to continue w/ life after giving in to such darkness. Hint, hint, please consider a possible tie-in story.
| Valorie chapter 1 . 4/7/2005