Reviews for Hurricane in the Eyes
Zhirea chapter 1 . 4/20/2001
It's really good... specially the part: The lover forced to be a machine/

The machine that fell in love/

Watch and observe/

Look close to see the man./

You can see the hurricane/

Storming behind his eyes.

It was incredible! Keep it up! BTW, did you know that you can post your fanfic poetry at Poetry/Fanfiction Poetry here in on this site? It's much better and organized that way. Just to let you know. Ale'01.
Parodys chapter 1 . 3/26/2001
Michael...our boy toy of angst. I really like the imagery that you use, it describes him very aptly. I like your work...keep writing!
auntie callisto chapter 1 . 3/20/2001
mmmmm...Michael...sorry I have to go take a cold shower now. Okay, now that my evil twin is gone : I love the way you word things. Ever written something other than poetry?