|Reviews for Hurricane in the Eyes|
| Zhirea chapter 1 . 4/20/2001
It's really good... specially the part: The lover forced to be a machine/
The machine that fell in love/
Watch and observe/
Look close to see the man./
You can see the hurricane/
Storming behind his eyes.
It was incredible! Keep it up! BTW, did you know that you can post your fanfic poetry at Poetry/Fanfiction Poetry here in on this site? It's much better and organized that way. Just to let you know. Ale'01.
| Parodys chapter 1 . 3/26/2001
Michael...our boy toy of angst. I really like the imagery that you use, it describes him very aptly. I like your work...keep writing!
| auntie callisto chapter 1 . 3/20/2001
mmmmm...Michael...sorry I have to go take a cold shower now. Okay, now that my evil twin is gone : I love the way you word things. Ever written something other than poetry?