Reviews for By The Pool
Lya Tomcant chapter 2 . 7/12/2009
KYA! i love it!
gen chapter 2 . 5/18/2009
love it
Guest chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
romantic yet perverted i mean that in a good way sort of
agreywriter15 chapter 2 . 1/31/2009
Well no spelling errors here...but you mixed up some of the words.

Good story though.
agreywriter15 chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
You told us to tell you if you mispelled anything right well I found one.

"She watches as he realizing just what he mists."

The mists is spelled wrong. It's supposed to spell miss, right?

Well anyways I'm off to the second chapter.
alex chapter 2 . 10/28/2007
so is that all of it
baskervilledragonlord chapter 2 . 10/8/2005
how sweet
XxMoMo'n'DaRkxX chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
AHAHAH I luv it

Momo:Iz the best

Mushra:course it is it got me in it

Momo:Like i care

Mushra:i know you do

Momo:SHUT UP PLEASE

Mushra :Say it like you mean it

Momo: T.T PLEASE

Mushra:Much better

Momo: I am the best

Mushra:Yes i know...WAT ur not the best

Momo:U sed so

Mushra:I thought u meant me...

Momo:I wouldnt like to be you

Mushra:I wanna be me

Momo:Sure...

Mushra:THE STRY WAS THE BEST

Momo:HA YOU JUST ADMIT UR NOT THE BEST

Mushra:Thats true...

Momo:Ok then we are the best

MUshra:YA MOMO AND MUSHRA ARE THE BEST !

Momo:No i meant the stry and me are the best...!
perishedlove chapter 2 . 7/5/2005
Great work! I love Yakumo/Mushra
YakumosTwin chapter 2 . 5/27/2005
I was starting to think you wouldn't write a new chapter
meant2be chapter 2 . 5/19/2005
Yeah... That's really good i like it alot I just have one suggestion i think yu keep using "where" instead of "were" but um "where" is the one that means a place
bluerosepunk chapter 2 . 5/8/2005
so sweet you desever an oscare i didn't spell that write congradulations
Mushrambolover chapter 2 . 5/7/2005
Aw...*speechless*
Kitsune's Grrl chapter 2 . 5/6/2005
aww... how sweet.
Mukira chapter 2 . 5/5/2005
Ok chapter, useless and pointless, got me no where, you can do better.
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