|Reviews for By The Pool|
| Lya Tomcant chapter 2 . 7/12/2009
KYA! i love it!
| gen chapter 2 . 5/18/2009
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
romantic yet perverted i mean that in a good way sort of
| agreywriter15 chapter 2 . 1/31/2009
Well no spelling errors here...but you mixed up some of the words.
Good story though.
| agreywriter15 chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
You told us to tell you if you mispelled anything right well I found one.
"She watches as he realizing just what he mists."
The mists is spelled wrong. It's supposed to spell miss, right?
Well anyways I'm off to the second chapter.
| alex chapter 2 . 10/28/2007
so is that all of it
| baskervilledragonlord chapter 2 . 10/8/2005
| XxMoMo'n'DaRkxX chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
AHAHAH I luv it
Momo:Iz the best
Mushra:course it is it got me in it
Momo:Like i care
Mushra:i know you do
Momo:SHUT UP PLEASE
Mushra :Say it like you mean it
Momo: T.T PLEASE
Momo: I am the best
Mushra:Yes i know...WAT ur not the best
Momo:U sed so
Mushra:I thought u meant me...
Momo:I wouldnt like to be you
Mushra:I wanna be me
Mushra:THE STRY WAS THE BEST
Momo:HA YOU JUST ADMIT UR NOT THE BEST
Momo:Ok then we are the best
MUshra:YA MOMO AND MUSHRA ARE THE BEST !
Momo:No i meant the stry and me are the best...!
| perishedlove chapter 2 . 7/5/2005
Great work! I love Yakumo/Mushra
| YakumosTwin chapter 2 . 5/27/2005
I was starting to think you wouldn't write a new chapter
| meant2be chapter 2 . 5/19/2005
Yeah... That's really good i like it alot I just have one suggestion i think yu keep using "where" instead of "were" but um "where" is the one that means a place
| bluerosepunk chapter 2 . 5/8/2005
so sweet you desever an oscare i didn't spell that write congradulations
| Mushrambolover chapter 2 . 5/7/2005
| Kitsune's Grrl chapter 2 . 5/6/2005
aww... how sweet.
| Mukira chapter 2 . 5/5/2005
Ok chapter, useless and pointless, got me no where, you can do better.