|Reviews for Friendly Competition|
| Ropihl chapter 1 . 5/11/2008
finally a normal pairing, not an albelxfaytxcliff cliffxfatyxalbel thing! yay, good job!
| Nanali chapter 3 . 10/18/2006
You should totally continue this. I'm so sad that you stopped. This looks so cute! And it's so good so far!
| Moshi Moshi Mai chapter 3 . 3/16/2006
Lol, that was cute! I see you haven't updated in a while, but hopefully you will soon!
Moshi Moshi Mai
| Moshi Moshi Mai chapter 2 . 3/16/2006
Love the fight! I wonder if Mirage was drugged somehow before the fight?
| Moshi Moshi Mai chapter 1 . 3/16/2006
Sounds promising. :)
| Still Stream chapter 3 . 1/6/2006
Yay! A Cliff x Mirage fic! I love this pairing. And you pull it off so well. Even if Mirage is a little OOC (and like you said, it was years ago and people can change a lot in a few years). I'd always wanted to know more about their past, and I love the way you wrote it. Can't wait for future chapters!
| Blue Persuasion chapter 3 . 11/13/2005
How on earth did I miss this until now? *Bangs head against keyboard - hsikem,skdufbekaiehfdhafjhdaiw*
This is so good! I don't know if you plan on doing more...with the other fics (which are awsome!) but if you do then I would love to read more.
I want to know who did that to Mirage. We all know she can beat (if not tie with)Cliff anyday...
This is being added to my favs anyway.
| Any-more-cheese chapter 3 . 10/27/2005
please update i want more!
| Paper Bear chapter 3 . 9/24/2005
Update please! I've been trying to find a good Mirage and Cliff fic all day, and so far, this is the only one.
| Sirea the Beautiful Disaster chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
*adds to favorites*
| StormTorrent chapter 2 . 8/27/2005
Cliff was PERFECTLY in character this chapter! Oh wow, this is so great! I'm totally 100% enjoying this story to the fullest...
I loved the part where Cliff was trying "to think clean" and he "conjured up some dirty mental pictures involving a shower". That made me laugh.
All through this, I've been trying to get a clean picture in my mind. The Fight was very vivid. All the punches, kicks, everything was really good! Your description jumped up my about a thousand. *hehe* It's amazing.
Keep it up! I'm still reading!
| StormTorrent chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
First off I applaud you for not being like some block-heads who pair up people like Fayt x Albel, Fayt x Cliff (which seems to be a popular one...X_X), or Cliff x Albel.
Personally, I really do like Mirage and Cliff together! There are so few people who even see that couple as a possibility (cause they're blind!). Cliff happens to be my favorite character, and I'll say you're playing him pretty well in Character. Sure, he'd totally underestimate Mirage! He's Cliff-why wouldn't he? (Mr. Overconfident!)
But yes, I love the story line. With a little more description, it could be absolutely perfected. For a couple of those lines (Ex. "Scar-ee!") I could actually hear Cliff's voice in my head.
Keep up the good work! I'll be reading.
| crimson-fantasy chapter 3 . 8/2/2005
I love your writing and once again i would reveiw longer but i got lots and lots and lots o shit to do but i really like this story i can't wait for the next chap i am sure this one will be really popualr in my C2 i would
acore you if you wrote more fics for it any pairing that fits the guidlines is fine with me there are some i am more into but who cares i think you have gotten me really interested in this pairing just from reading this foc though
| crimson-fantasy chapter 2 . 8/2/2005
i absolutly love this fic i love this chapter even more than the last your really great at this and your perywinkle box thing thas hillarious normally i leave longer reveiws but i really wanna read the next chap
| crimson-fantasy chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
i loved this fic it was great you don't see an of good cliff Marage fics i myself am caught between cliff nell and cliff marage but i love them both i noticed too in your bio ur into some kickass stuff i love garth nix books shades children rocked and so did the Sabreil trioligy i love final fantasy too you did a great job with charictors too they are perfect i can so see marage young and feisty like that and eventually maturing through their time together i really like this fic so i a Going to put it in my C2 any other stories that fit my C2 terms and welcomed too i love you writing i will keep in tough and i agree yaoi and Yuri are repulsive