wonderful job keeping the intense not-yet-entirely-safe atmosphere while establishing lighthearted dialogues throughout, i loved this chapter much- roy's too awesome with his indifferent sarcasm XD

Finally. I was tired of Al complianing.

:D OHOHOHO ...sorry... xD;

Great chapter~ I can't wait for somthing to go wrong

YAY you updated I loved it as always update as soon as you can huggs to ya for another great chapter

OMG! This is awesome. X_X *lovelove* It must be one of the most interesting plot Ive read in a long time. Unpredictable. That's great. *nodnod* Keep it up!

Yes! Another chapter! So Al /wasn't/ being merely stupid. God plot. You rock. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter. :)

VB:'"Would you prefer Midnight was a woman?" drawled Roy grinning.' XD I swear to you, I said something along those lines just today.

Hiro:-_- No you didn't. You just like that.

VB:. Yes I did! Oh well. This chapter was really good, and the end was funny. Just keep writing, stop keeping me in suspense, dammit! X_X

GAH! Oh the suspense...the humanity! LOL good chapter.

Very interesting story.

al, you party-pooper, that was so much fun, you can't NOT do it again! but if he went around imitating roy's sadistic actions he wouldn't be Al i suppose i loved the action in this chapter, scenes flowed rapidly with great sequence. aWeSoMe really.

wow, roy was getting a little scarry there for a minute, and al needs to realize the importance of finishing this...hm, i dunno, write more soon, i really like these chapters!

Gah, and Al ruins everything again .;

Ah, who cares, Al still rocks ._.

Kick ass as always but must not leave me hangn like dat plz update quick. i love this frigging story._

VB:T_T Poor Al..poor Ed...

Hiro:o_O What about Roy?

VB:Oh yeah, him too.

Hiro:-_-' I think she's trying to say to put Roy in a bit more..although I don't think that's possible.

VB:Gasp! Al backs out at the last minute, cliffhanger! .

Ah! What is Al's problem? Doesn't he want to escape? :( Suspensful! You are such a great writer!