Reviews for Kaiba's Deodorant Problem
ShadowClanAlphaShadowRaven chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
What are you talking about? That was great! Better then my story for sure. It's hilarious! Write more please.

SlytherinMax chapter 1 . 8/1/2005
Ryan: I agree with you. THAT FUCKIN' SUCKED! You have good writing skills, you just don't use them right! You are like the first person who I, WE, Have given bad reviews to. You have the ability to write decent stories, you just choose not to.

Angel: I didn't think it was to bad. I thought it was kinda funny...

Sakura: Me to...

Ryan: Well thats you! I thought it sucked! And I'm serious! You have the potential to write a GOOD funny story but you don't!

Bai bai!
Serenity Meowth chapter 1 . 7/30/2005
Oh, wow, this was so freakin weird and hilarious! :D I'll read more of your stories later!:)
Jeanne-KKJ chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
Well I'm back XD HI! XD

So.. It was WEIRD XD But I iked it XD haha I like your writing XD
Freak09 chapter 1 . 4/6/2005
THat was hilarious! I think it was absolutely hilarious!
comcastmobile chapter 1 . 4/5/2005
I read this of my own free will and I'm afraid I'd have to disagree.


I love Yami's ignorance. Honestly, how do people expect him to know what everything is?

Maybe you could do another play on his ancient mind...imagine me trying to write a fic when he was in ALGEBRA class. that was unsuccessful.
WitchMewMew chapter 1 . 4/5/2005
I give your story five thumbs up!Write more