Reviews for I am The Lancer
bcrazybrealbyou chapter 10 . 1/3/2009
I know this fic has probably been long forgotten, but for the sake of your readers PLEASE continue on! I must say I'm very impressed with your fantastic imagery skills and your ability to make the reader feel a deep connection, understanding, and addiction to the story and its characters. Something to watch however, is the transitions to different scenes with different characters. If the new scene is not explained well enough (what is happening, who the characters involved are, and how it relates to the main storyline) it can cause confusion to readers, they may have to re-read or do some guessing. Remember you may know the relevance of it but chances are the reader doesn't! Only something to keep in mind. Please don't abandon this fic, its wonderfully written and it would be a shame to see such talent wasted.

Much love, bcbrby
Baraku chapter 10 . 4/9/2007
That was awesome. Keep up the good work. Please do not forget about this story again.
Nightstar Grayson chapter 10 . 3/22/2007
This is good! U gotta update soon!
Chip of Silver chapter 10 . 3/22/2007
Yay! You updated! I love your storys. Please continue this one!
RoseXxxXThorn chapter 10 . 3/22/2007
Haha. Yes yes, Robin bashes his head. Very funny and interesting! New and awesome! Update soon!

Love ya!

Chip of Silver chapter 9 . 8/11/2006
Where is it that you have vanished off to? It's been almot a YEAR since you last updated...
Baraku chapter 9 . 2/25/2006
So far so good. Keep up the good work. I like that you brought back Chroma for this story.
Pakkrat chapter 9 . 5/7/2005
So that was cool. Robin (Victor Garfield Roth Grayson) would get taxing to write over and over I guess. I'm interested in seeing how the Titans will all interact with this time-traveler! Maybe Raven... (snicker) could find Lancer interesting for his mind-cloaking powers and other unique characteristics that lead to B.B. not liking him. B.B. could feel he was another "Pretty-Boy" trying to take his already unusual place in the Titan team. Just an idea, mainly cause I found Raven's interest in Lancer kind of odd as she plays his Knorfka in the future, might get weird if the past her had a crush on him. Can't wait to see what you do next any how. Good job! Happy Writings!
Pakkrat chapter 8 . 5/7/2005
Short, but Teen-Titan like. Kind of cool set-up with simple robbers. Good work, Happy Writings.
Pakkrat chapter 7 . 5/7/2005
Sure I'm reading. (shifty eyes) matter 'o' fact, now that I took a "Break" from writing those two fics for The Rage, I find I have more time and don't feel bad about not working on them. Figured since I had time I'd review your stuff. So Chroma took Robin/Lancer as its master? Hm... seems fishy, like the time Chroma original took B.B. Can't wait to see where this little mix-up goes.
Pakkrat chapter 6 . 5/7/2005
Hm, so he has the suit and powers... but does not use them? Blasted kid is too much like his mother. Still great story so far. I like the way it seems some what like an adventure. Very good work, Happy Writings.
Pakkrat chapter 5 . 5/7/2005
Hm, so Robin (Lancer) can't seem to understand the picking order of the school system? Sounds slightly like a fortunate thing for him. You explained Erica and her attitude towards other very well, I especially liked the referance to sheep following without concern. Good job, Happy Writigs.
Pakkrat chapter 4 . 4/29/2005
Fresco Kafka appears finally, AKA the Leech. Well this will be interesting enough. Chroma and Sigma also appear. BB is better in your story than the show of an sligtly stubby and balding man. Also an interesting poem though I found fat rat a tad bad. Just kidding, good work and happy writings.
Pakkrat chapter 3 . 4/29/2005
Hey voice talents! I like that! So Kitten is looking out for Robin? Weird, though if money is involved okay. Loving the stuff you got here dude way to go!
StaroftheNights chapter 8 . 4/25/2005
Great chapter! Short but great chapter! I like the flashbacks there are interesting! I can't wait for the next chapter!

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