|Reviews for Shadowplay|
| Stormcutter684 chapter 1 . 1/31
Oh .. My gosh. This was hauntingly beautiful. It had me really curious as to what was going to happen, and the ghosts whispering and beckoning "come play" was like from a horror movie itself.
I kept looking around cautiously ... Just in case. And then the ghosts appeared, and Estel played with them. And he was very smart, out smarting them with the riddles. And in the end ..
The children were at peace. They could finally join their parents in blissful peace. Such a beautiful ending. And when he carved their names in, it all clicked together and it makes sense now.
Again, such a spooky, hauntingly beautiful story. :)
Hannon le, mellon nin, for making such a great story.
| Jesper Arratay chapter 1 . 11/26/2014
Wow. That was really good. You had me really creeped out for a while until Estel so cleverly solved the problem. :D
| wswpub chapter 1 . 3/17/2014
What a . its so very different then the usual type of story.
| gginsc chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
Yeah! A happy ending for all. Love it.
| Artista321 chapter 1 . 9/5/2013
How touching was that? I cried a bit. Just a bit.
| Crazy Dyslexic Nerd chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
Interesting concept. Lovely story. I love how you write the characters, and it fits with old stories. Quite good.
| hills chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
| Metoochocolate chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
Genius! Brilliant writing!
| Emily chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
That was a nice story, very original. : )
It was eerie at first, but the ending was just sad. I feel sorry for the father, and the kids, too, of course.
| asdfjkl chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
| Demon Faith chapter 1 . 5/16/2005
Oh, beauty. I loved the image of Estel desperate to protect and the haunting of the children, both mentally and physically. Brilliant work.
| Angel chapter 1 . 4/14/2005
Am going to hold off the blubbering 'til I've gotten some coherent throughts through, hehe!
Very very good! Impressive! I felt the cold, and the swirling mists, and goosebumpbs assailed my spine with that dragging wood across the house! It perhaps helped that it's 1am here and am all alone and cold in a darkened house, so was constantly releasing heaving sighs and casting quick prayers lol.
But I really REALLY LIKE the idea and the structuring. And I notice it has that inherent streak of your writing which I loved when I first read "light my path" this sense of accidental accomplishment. How his failure to reach his goal afforded something far more precious eeww excuse my use of the word lol.
Finally - BLUBBERING GLEE!
Suddenly, Estel felt a smile spread over his face. “The shadows”, he said, “they are gone.”
“Nay, my friend”, Legolas replied, “not merely gone. Replaced with light by you.”
yeh yeah long review, sorry...but I do hope "Light my Path" has been updated... or else no more choccie fishes for you missy! :P
| NightShadow131 chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
Wow... that was... amazing! Just... amazing! I cannot believe now good that was. One of your best work yet! Seriously. I love how you described everything! The snow, the shadows, how they resolved everything. It was all just really well done! Do you have any work actually published? If ya don't you really should have some!
I'm glad that Estel was able to find a way to bring peace to the chldren. And the ending was wonderful too. Man, I should have read t his sooner! Just didn't have any time before...
Keep up the amazing work!
Ja ne _~
Wow... just... wow.
| Alariel chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
Wow! What a wonderful story. The ambiance you created was wonderful and the release of the four tiny souls at the end was truly heartening. Well done.
| Despo chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
And SO creepy in the 2nd part!