This was very sweet. I loved how Akane took out a fighter in the end. The banter was great, as was Ranma's misunderstanding and bruised ego. It felt very true to the characters with a dash of extra maturity thrown in.

suffering... from... cute overload! ack!

Cute fic. Short, but nice bit of development there.

YOu capture the feel of the show quite well, a good mixture of humor and sweetness and fighting. I love the thoughts you give Ranma, they are so true to character. Nice work!

I just have one thing to say... kawaii!

You have the best last lines! "'It's my job . . . as your fiancé'" SWEET!

This is good!

Nice.

This one is cute as well. Your writing is easy to read and you have good conversations, need to work on action or leave it out, but you are doing excellant. Try a longer story, you should do very well.

nice story, but you really need some sort of summery if you want more readers (although it may just be my computer playing tricks on me).

Aw so cute! You are really good at keeping these guys in charachter, although I would love to see Ranma and Akane finally kiss each other. Anyway I can't wait to see the next story!

Hey! its really cool! I really liked it! Kol