|Reviews for Fallout|
| CPDCSI chapter 2 . 4/10/2005
Nice job so far...I am hoping however, it will end up being our favorite GSR (not greggo). Keep the faith, he may only be a distraction. They have used him in the past and Sarah has played along. I think they are far too different to be anything serious. Nice characterization of Greg, definitely in keeping with the series. He is a good friend but not a real love interest.
| Duckie24 chapter 2 . 4/9/2005
Aw, poor Sara. I think Greggo will do her some good. Please keep it Greg/Sara the whole way through! I don't think Grissom deserves to have her in the end.
| Blaze chapter 2 . 4/9/2005
You're a fast updater, aren't you? Well, that's another good aspect to you, I suppose. I liked this chapter, but I was getting the feeling that it was rushed in some way. The beginning wasn't but towards the end it sort of picked up speed. I hope you plan on making this a semi-long fic and not just a few chapters. Add the flavor, kick up the rating if you have to. But I still like this, just try to color it up! Throw in some type of action (( whatever you consider action ))... My idea of action in stories is possibly a different concept of your action. But I can't wait until your next update. I have no suggestions to this story as of yet, but give me a while, and something somewhat useful will pop up. Lol
Peace out, one love,
Blaze (( Cloe ))
| Kelly chapter 2 . 4/9/2005
Aww. This is sad. Have Greg save her. I love Greg and Sara stories! Great Job!
| moi chapter 2 . 4/9/2005
I love the story, hope you keep going!
| Blaze chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
Hmm... Greg/Sara? That really, truly doesn't fall under my top interest, but I'll give this a shot. Who knows? I might end up liking this type of relationship... Maybe. So, I don't flame, but I still a strong believer in true GSR. Gil/Sara... Just so you know. But I actually thought this chapter was good! Surprisingly! Congrats on that! I think I'll stick with this story until the end. Damn, am I changing or what? Anywho, I hope you don't drop this story, and even if you are trying Greg, I just gotta say it once. I HOPE YOU END IT WITH THE ORIGINAL GSR! Lol... But on a last note, keep up the good work. You've got talent.
Peace out, one love,
North and South,
Just do your best
To guard and protect her while she rest.
| Craz Lollipop-Imp chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
ok needs a little work though
| Phoenix38133 chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
I loved it! Are you gonna do any more chapters?
| csicrazii chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
cute story! update soon!
| Ambient Flames chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
GSR stands for Grissom/Sara Romance only. GrSR is for Greg/Sara Romance... by putting GSR you are deceiving the people who come to read your story. :P