Reviews for The River |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, so this is the end. I'm getting that little empty feeling I get whenever I finish a particularly excellent story, but I knew it had to end eventually. I very much approve of this last chapter. It wasn't overly dramatic, and it tied off loose ends well. At least they know for sure that Brund's dead. It wouldn't do for the fellowship to be constantly looking over its shoulder for him. His death also finally gave Legolas and Sam closure to this horrible ordeal. This story sets a good foundation to Legolas and Gimli's friendship, and I adore the character development. This was a really brilliant story. I hope we'll be seeing more of you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A well-rounded ending for a fantastic story. I'm sorry it's over, but like all good things, it couldn't go on forever. You provided good closure with Brund, and I like how it ties in with the bigger trilogy; the parts between Legolas and Gimli, Frodo's thoughts about the other hobbits and the Ring. It flows right into the grander epic. Thanks so much for this; I enjoyed the story immensely, and just the writing itself. I'd like to read whatever you come up with next. Til then. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Thanks so much for finishing this lovely piece of writing. It was a consistant joy to read and always brought a smile to my face when it updated. The way you concluded things was tasteful and elegant and not overdramatic (thank you). :) I hope you come up with anouther delicious story soon, I'll be one of the first to read it when you do. Thank you! ~The Balrog |
![]() ![]() that story is brilliant are you going to do another |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know what you mean, there's a melancholy feeling about finishing a story, you're glad it's done but at the same time you're sad that it is. Well it's been a pleasure to read the fruits of your labors, hopefully in the near future I'll read one of your new stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What an amazing journey this has been! I'm so sorry it's over. *wail* But I'm very much looking forward to something new from your pen, yay. I hope the gods of Middle Earth are smiling on your muses. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just wanted to drop you a short note that I immensely enjoyed reading your story. I loved your portrayal of the growing friendship between Legolas and Sam. |
![]() ![]() aw.. It's so sad that it's over. You've written a great story and I've loved it every step of the way :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! I really enjoyed this story, the characterisation was brilliant the storyline was excellent...what else can I say except I'm sad its finished :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah! Don't hurt Merry! |
![]() ![]() ![]() o_O another amazing chapter! Some good old Leggy angst, although I will be MOST upset if you kill him! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! Legolas and Gimli's interactions are my favorite part. It's a little sad that the story is over. Do you think you'll be doing more LotR fanfiction after this? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh the awesomeness! Finally some Legolas angst! Hope to find some more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! I am reading your story! And its awesome! I read this far in one sitting and I'm having a great time! Why is Legolas so fun to beat up? |
![]() ![]() I wanted to let you know I really liked this story. I had you on chapter alert from the beginning so I could make sure I caught it all. I enjoyed mostly how you showed the emotions of the fellowship, and the way you developed the character seemed to totally match what I have always had in my head. Please continue writing, there is so much on this sight that is not worth reading that I crave stories like yours. Jambaby |