|Reviews for All that I am for you|
| Shadows of a Dream chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
I'm no expert on poetry but I kind of like this. :)
One error where you should have put "were" and wrote "where" but hey, stuff like that happens.
| Jedi Master Rev chapter 1 . 11/26/2005
Its so sweet. You do a good job on your poems.
| Tara230 chapter 1 . 9/16/2005
| StatlerWaldorf chapter 1 . 8/16/2005
Yay for Carth! I love your poems. They really capture the right feelings.
| Rei Talyn chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
Nice. You should go and become a writer.
| Master Alabe chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
I like this... I guess with a female revan, Carth would be there in that way. Although at first I thought it was a male Revan he was talkin about (I'm used to males Revan's - lol)... just glad I realised otherwise... keep writing and posting!
| Shadows Run chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
Poor Carth. You can hear his frustration, it really is the way he'd talk. This part of the story always makes me so sad. Very well stylized. I love your poems. He's sounds sincerely sad, not angsty like a teenager. It's real pain. Very touching.