|Reviews for The Before and Aftermath|
| Katsumoto chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
Sorry for coming so late. So many years after you wrote this. You understood. The spirit. Everything is changing too fast. No mind. Please. Please. Definitely. Continue the Poem.
| narakunohime chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
loved it. :)
| ThorinKiliandFili4ever chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
A great story. Very good.
| a reader chapter 1 . 10/30/2008
Stumbled upon this; it's been a while since I've seen TLS but it filled the gaps well and it was an enjoyable read. Well done.
| Lal chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
You should definitely continue. It is interestin to see how you merged the movie with your fanfic. I hope you will not quit writing...
| tankbbg chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
I;m glad that someone has finally written a piece on Last Samurai, but the only thing was Algren. He seemed, to borrow a line from another reviewer, too blunt, making him ooc. But that was it.
| Shogun chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
Well done, you filled in the blanks. I have a few complaints though. The simple thoughts and unspoken questions in Algren's mind were too bluntly put. Algren was a complex charactor. Remember that this story takes place shortly after the American Civil War so word his thoughts according to the historical time period. Use the narrative from the movie for an example of the way he thinks and for help on wording his thoughts justly. Your Nathan Algren seemed too simple minded and lacked the complexity of a real human being. I am only offering you ways to improve your writing. I also cannot stress enough-Use more detail. However, I enjoyed your version of the story and see where most of it came from. Good job.
| The Fanfic Phantom chapter 1 . 6/21/2005
nice. Story I like it! UPdate soon.
| Dreaming n Watercolors chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
I liked this overall. I felt it was a little rushed, some parts skipped over a bit but a nice look into what may have happened. I'm glad you wrote this.
| xInuyashaxangelx chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
Pretty good, definetly caught my intrest. It'd be cool if you could do one for the ending of the movie, what Algren was thinking, Taka, Higen and yeah lol I thought that it sorta sucked, maybe you can add stuff to it? lol that'd be cool. Well, good job with this.