|Reviews for When, Where, What Time?|
| LadyBardock chapter 15 . 9/26/2014
I wish you would write a sequel ;)
| Vegeta and Bulma fan 4900 chapter 15 . 1/27/2014
Nice. Real nice. I love it!
| Vegeta and Bulma fan 4900 chapter 9 . 11/4/2013
I really love the whole story. Not just because it is about Vegeta and Bulma, but because it is so humorous, romantic, and, well, I just love it. So, thank you for writing such a great story.
| princessarmstrong chapter 14 . 6/4/2013
| princessarmstrong chapter 2 . 6/4/2013
| Guest chapter 15 . 10/7/2012
Your story had a great start, but once you revealed Vegeta and Bulma's relationship to everyone the story became uneventful to want to keep reading. I did finish, but I am regretting it. Nothing happened, how many times can we read about them going shopping, the characters became much more shallow and one-dimensional. Instead of writing so many chapters about the Bahamas, which nothing interesting happened, maybe you should have written out Vegeta and Bulma's discussion about the college decision. I can see why many readers did not finish reading this story.
Yet, your other story MESSAGES is so much better written, still a few grammatical errors and spelling, but the plot is really good. Plus, the B-line stories are also good. So the good thing you have really improved your writing skills.
| Guest chapter 12 . 10/7/2012
the problem is not length, but the content of the chapters. I can see you did lose your mojo for this story. Maybe you should scrap the bahamas chapters out, they don't add anything to the story-too many and are not eventful or useful for your story.
| Guest chapter 8 . 10/2/2012
this chapter was unnecessary nothing happened.
| Vegetita Dragon Ballera chapter 15 . 9/13/2012
hi i realy like your fic it was so nice abd cute well good job i wish the end was more i dont now more happy or sheesy haha anyway i love it
| vegetaboo chapter 15 . 12/27/2009
of course love it
| Musette Fujiwara chapter 15 . 6/10/2007
Awesome... story, I loved how they stayed together in the end... all of them...
| Gogeta chapter 1 . 3/5/2007
Id like to read a sequel to this it was a great story and should be continued
| the cridic chapter 15 . 3/29/2006
make a sequile
| Geta chapter 15 . 3/13/2006
So... I think this could have been a lot better. . . . At times I wanted to give up on it because there wasn't really a plot... It was a good storyline, but the grammar and spelling errors were absolutely appalling! I hope I don't offend you in saying that, but it wouldn't hurt to re-read the chapter before posting it. ((Or maybe have someone beta read for you!(:(:)) Hmmn, other things I noticed - Chi Chi and Bulma wear the same thing over and over again... Chi Chi with her black skirts and white halters ... Bulma always had some sort of blue top on... I'd expand the wardrobe a bit, I mean come one here - it's the "rich people" we're reading about! LoL... Another thing, you used a lot of the same phrases over and over again like "slender waist" that was used WaY too many times. We all know their slender and fit, so maybe you could come up with another idea of explaining what you were thinking... Well, I hope this review was helpful - keep writing, I enjoy your style!
| Herra chapter 15 . 8/7/2005
It may be an old story, it's very good ! Long, but very good !