Reviews for Maybe
Digidynasty chapter 3 . 5/4/2005
I wish you'd make the chapters longer and add some more details. You have an awesome story idea here, but since everything's straight to the point, scene's rush by quickly. Don't think this is a flame cause it's not. I always think people can improve on thier writing and adding detail would such in readers a lot more. I'm putting you on author alert cause I want to read more so keep goign!
thehoundsfox chapter 3 . 5/4/2005
Awesome! please update ! i kn o how hard it is to think up of stories but could ya make em longer

Nachos chapter 2 . 5/1/2005
Well... Not many reviews for this story. But I think it's a good start. Maybe you could make the chapters a little longer and a tad more detailed? And I hope you continue this soon, I wanna knows what happens.