Reviews for Breaking Point
va chapter 1 . 3/14/2007
I thought that it was realy sad! I loved it! But I think you should have gone in to more detail on Shu's emotional torment.
BlackWingedAngel-Lucifer chapter 1 . 9/10/2006
T_T *Cries* TT_TT *Sniff* I know this was posted like one year ago, but I still have to review, this was so sad and I'm a huge fan of angst and tragedy and this is a part of my new favorites and you a part of mi new fav authors, gotta go update mi profile now. Of course by now, you write so much better, but this is amazing! I was crying and shaking, omigawd thankyu so much for this awesum fanfic and my favorite part was the ending I LOVED IT eve though it was sad, so sad, made mi heart skip a few beats and it took awhile 2 comprhend what I just read T_T

“Why? I’ve waited for two years, Yuki.” Tears formed in his eyes and a smile grew on his face. “Don’t you think that’s long enough?”A tear fell amongst the giggles. “He he he, see you in hell, Yuki.”Yuki, frozenwhere he stood,caughta final, fleeting glimpse of tears falling from amethyst eyes andShuichi arched backwards,

and fell into the blackness of the night below.

yuki

that was indeed the best part of the story so awesum! T_T I'm still so sad from it though XD Okies, I think I need to stop babbling now, but I simply LOVE your writing style
mourninrose chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
Please, tell me there is more to the story! I was so into it!
Zollercoaster chapter 1 . 4/9/2006
I'm not sure whether to laugh or cry... This is wonderful, great job.
Dejichan4444 chapter 1 . 2/22/2006
O_O OMG! Shuichi lost it! Bad Yuki,bad! Shuichi JUMPED OUT A WINDOW? Oh no! O -cries- this is so sad! Yuki's so evil! -cries some more-
CosmicEssence chapter 1 . 2/16/2006
Aww man that was sad particularly before he went crazed. Had me believing for a sec although there was something about that yuki/ Shu scene that didn't quite get the point across. But it was good.
lolly-moon chapter 1 . 6/16/2005
really good. i'm speechless. gave me a god cry
Mizuky chapter 1 . 6/8/2005
WOW what an end, it was really sad what Shu felt, but in fact waiting for 2 years without a word of love from the one you love the most is awful, my poor Shu :( I really like Yuki but in this fic he deserves to suffer, good job
i love athrun chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
IT IS GOOD BUT DO A NEW CHAPTER!
shikisou chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
he's gone mad...wah it's so 's a basterd
Ziggy the Destroyer chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
Mandy, you make me sad! good fic, though. can't wait for the next one and I hope the play don't suck too bad.
Kaylariana chapter 1 . 4/15/2005
oh, shuichi! Very well written. GOod job.
Ryua Malfoy chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
Aww, it was sad, but nicely written anyway.
DG a.k.a Demon Gurl chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
my heart aches with sorrow for shuichi and i just loved the ending for yuki. yuki was so caught up in his work he didn't realize that he was missing out on the one thing that loved him. now he will never have it back! i am evil and i loved the way you revised it form the original. i can't wait for your other stories!
Hyper Chef chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
AH! *huggles poor Shuichi* This was so sad! Please.. tell me your other fic/s are a lot nicer than this? I know Yuki has a heart.. somewhat... so please, don't torture Shuichi anymore... *crying*

Other than the sadness effect, this was really good. *thumbs up*

Will you read my story?