Ultimatums are not healthy in any situation in a relationship!

Esta historia me parecia algo super bueno hasta que empezaron con cosas de animagos fenix y todo eso

Tu

I am enjoying the story. I am glad Remus went to the house. I hope something very bad happens to Uncle Vernon and let Harry take him down. I also like your original character even if he is a squib. Your story is wonderful.

Great story

I stop here. the letter from the dead was just fucking DUMB. badly written overall.

I want to say this story gets better every time I read it.

thank you

I know this is from almost 20 years ago, but I think it is funny. It has a really nice balance.

Ny

I'm glad to say I really love this story; sure there aren't very many chapters, and I would have taken the chapters and shortened them up a bit to help make the story have more chapters, but despite that, and all the "scene changes" that sorta irk me a bit(I mean, come on, it's a story not a play) it is, as I've alluded to, a very fine book, or rather, a "work of art". It's not perfect by any means, but it's near enough so, that you have earned the right for this story to be in my favorites list, as without question it is one of the best Harry Potter fanfiction stories I've read,(so far) that's marrying the wizarding world with muggle army tactics and techniques, such as, fighting, organization, and chain-of-command, and that plot device, in my opinion has married them together in such a way that no one can deny that it's integral to this alternate Harry Potter world, and would be detrimental without it. So many stories show Harry Potter as a one man army who is faded to do everything by himself no matter how much help he has, and although that is true to a certain extent it is nice to see a story where it's not just Harry and two or three others that are in the final battle but an entire group, that isn't related to the order of the Phoenix or Dumbledore, as Dumbledore can in a lot of books be a manipulative SOB especially when it comes to Harry being in love with Ginny or whoever happens to be the crush in the story... One thing I would like to note, is that professor Dumbledore or headmaster or whoever you want to call him seems to have found out towards the end that Harry and Ginny share something possibly akin to a soul bond that I have seen used in many other stories although the effects do not appear to be the same in this particular book, and if I am anywhere close to right might come to appear in the next book if what I hope to be true is true as I love a good (probably smutty) Soul Bond story more than anything else most days...

Of course, all that is probably because I'm a 35Y.O. Virgin, and if I can't "get any", at least I can live vicariously through Harry no matter how young or old he happens to be at the time, but still...(just saying)

Now, even if it's NOT a soul bond in this story, there's still the subplot Dumbledore brings up to himself near the end, regarding the chamber of secrets, where SOMETHING MUST have happened to create such emotional ties between them, or at least, in Dumbledore's mind, which is honestly, where most Harry/Ginny stories get their strengthening and possibly magical relationship from, and well, really, what better way to create a relationship, than the chivalrous Knight (or paladin) saving the damsel in distress, which in Harry Potter fanfiction, usually happens many times throughout the school years, to whoever he decides to play slap and tickle or catch the snitch(s) with, should there be such a pairing in those various stories...

IDK if Hollywood producers look for script writers on fanfiction sites, but dam, aside from the scenes overlapping a bit much for my usual taste, this WOULD DEFINITELY be a pretty good showcase of one's writing abilities, albeit IDK if this would qualify as a script, by the definition though... Definitely a good story so far, and it's not too complicated either... If my judgement is correct, a lot of stories I've read, end before they're completed because they are too complex, or else trying to be too "completist" for each scene and chapter, and it's hard to keep facts, figures, storylines, and people, let alone the world, straight; that said, I haven't finished the story yet but I hope it does continue to the end of the story and hopefully there is that sequel that apparently is around somewhere that I can then read after this...

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