Reviews for The Generals' Revenge
Silver Kagami chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
Hmm... I like the idea, but leaves alot of room for improvement. Make it longer. Some fics are better short, but not this. It all seemed to rushed... And make it more beleivable. The generals are WAY out of character. They wouldn't just start bowing to Zoisite. Nephrite HATES zoisite if you forgot. But I see alot of potential for this. E-mail me and I could further help you.