Reviews for The Game
themergitonian chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
Good one shot
Runecutter chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
I appreciate the idea behind the fic and with a slow and steady curve of escalation this might have become incredibly funny, romantic and pleasant to read.
Sadly what we got was a steep ride up Hormone Avenue escalating in a hilarious way going from hugs to snogs to petting in three steps each... are you kidding?
You've shown far too little patience for what this story prompt would have needed. And that destroyed the whole potential by sacrificing it to cheap puns on sexing it up. :(
Random number generator chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
"phsyical" should be "physical"
brennasalkin chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
More Please!
medstudent1026 chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
I was just going to favorite ths but then i Thought that it deserved a review... I like reading stories like this from time to time rather than those massive long chapters.. hope there were more like this
mkeeg91 chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
wow... never saw that coming!

great fic!
Mari01 chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
Really good!
RiverOffers chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
For the simplicity of it it was brilliant. I might steal the idea for when I write my own story.
Silver Scorpion chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
Hey! Awwww this one-shot was sooo cute...and totally funny! Love-ve it! Write more please! ]


Silver Scorpion
SorrisoD'amore chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
that was really good it was cute to!
Rheenie chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
wow, im reviewing lol that takes effort on my part and that i dont do much ! LOLO but i couldnt notreview this, it was perfect, tension, suspense and ...release *grins evil* I absol. loved it! U are a most brillant writer!
pisceanchic101 chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
Nice story. Cute yet sexy at the same time!
Marguex chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
I loved it, it was hilarious anyways I can't wait to read more of your stories they are different, but in good way good job.
breadman chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
lol.i relli like this i believe the term is '' friends with benifits''
Harmony101 chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
OK! I love this story! It's so.. so.. playful and fun and kind of kinky! I absolutely LOVE it!
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