Reviews for Adam's Eve
alie chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
i absaloutly lovve it. you need to write on. the best one i have read
Ellen Fitzwilliam Brandybuck chapter 1 . 10/3/2006
Very poetic! I adore the lyrical work you've got here. Very fitting to the beautiful story!
Helala chapter 1 . 9/4/2005
It's short and sweet. Beautiful. I love 'fingers stretched in a yeilding star'. Wonderful.
TheTroubleWithLoveIsYou chapter 1 . 4/13/2005

okay, a bit confused. never watched the movie b4 and this is the 1st fanfic of it i have read yet.

thanks, deni :)
Lizella chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
Powerful emotion, but way too short, I know I am your only reviewer, but could you please write longer and more of the characters. Please! I will never know what those others got against the English Patient!
The Bookbinder's Daughter chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
There's something about the opening line - the entire piece, but the beginning in particular - that feels as if it was from the actual novel. You've captured the style and the spirit of it perfectly. I like the 'role-reversal'; Hana as Almasy's despairing saint.

"...fingers stretched in a yielding star..." Beautiful.