|Reviews for The Darkness Within The Light|
| Kaya Winn chapter 1 . 10/16/2013
earlier today, i received information that one of my stories from Fan Fiction. Net had been stolen and placed up on a website without my permission.
i went to check and make sure that he didn't have others of mine posted, when i discovered that he had also posted you're story, word for word, 'Butterfly' as well.
www. wattpad 15177433-the-darkness-within-the-light This is the link to the page. i do not know if he has your permission or not, but i could not iwalk away from this without at least warning you.
Sincerely Kaya Winn.
| Louis IX chapter 13 . 4/24/2013
| Flutterbytink chapter 13 . 2/12/2013
So considering the last time you posted was in 06 I'm going to assume you've abandoned this story and move on to other stories. Which is a shame as I liked the way this one was going.
| Bunny Thief chapter 13 . 12/30/2011
The beginning of a story based on an actual original concept, tragically cut short in it's prime.
I suppose it's too much to hope you'll come back to finish. But not to worry... I've taken the liberty of opening a bunny ranch. All those fine looking women will not have to worry about- erm. Sorry. Got distracted by my dream (or at least A dream).
But I really did open a ranch for bunnies. I'm stealing all your plot bunnies and using them for breeding stock to mix with my own and others I've "apropriated". Even if you never return, have no fear that your unique, original bunnies will live on. (Of course if you make it back to this story and update quickly enough, I'll return the fluffy little terrors unmolested.)
At any rate, thanks for the start to an interesting and inventive story.
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/21/2011
Just FYI did you purposely make voldy a little ooh, or am I wrong and he is in character, it seemed he would kill Harry on sight
| Ravenclaw Slytherin chapter 13 . 8/23/2011
I like your story! Update soon!
| Caroline the Poet chapter 13 . 7/19/2011
I really liked where this story was going I hope you update it soon!
| kuro-hebi13 chapter 13 . 5/29/2011
please update this fic...
| werd me chapter 13 . 5/6/2011
awesome cant wait for more
| fan-freak121 chapter 13 . 5/3/2011
I would like to continue to read this and would love if you put up another chapter despite the fact it has been years since you had last updated.
| BookWorm230 chapter 13 . 3/16/2011
hurry up with chapter 14 please
| monbade chapter 13 . 1/24/2011
good story, 8 out of 10. To bad its dead
| Griffin Raven chapter 11 . 1/7/2011
I'm guessing that the tingle that both Harry and Kaela felt at different times when they've greeted each other must have been magic and it means something significant? Does it mean that Harry and Kaela are meant to be together?
Its great that Luna of all of Harry's friends seems to be the only one (at least so far) that truly understands just why Harry had to leave. Harry's friends seem to have forgotten that he'd just lost his godfather recently. So instead of bemoaning how angry, annoyed, sad that all of Harry's friends are they should be considering the reasons why Harry has chosen to leave from his point-of-view?
| Griffin Raven chapter 9 . 1/7/2011
Personally I think Harry should become closer to Kaela Moore. Because at least she wasn't a teenage fangirl of the "boy-who-lived" and certainly didn't have a crush on him. Instead she seems to like Harry Potter the youngest seeker in a century. Also she seemed more interested in his him personally and his flying abilities and not supposed hero status of vanquishing Voldemort when he was 1yr old.
Whereas Ginny, grew up listening to ludiciours tales about the boy hero, "the-boy-who-lived" who defeated Voldemort as a year old. Its certainly clear that she has feelings for Harry Potter the boy-who-lived, but does she feel the same way about just Harry the great flyer. Will she ever be able to look past his supposed fame and wealth.
I just loved the fact that Severus is clearly loyal to Volde-mort and not to Dumbledore. So was him seeking the light and offering to spy for Dumbledore, a ruse/plan set in motion by Voldemort? Though I imagine that Severus would be very angry to learn that the 2-lines of the prophecy that he brought to Voldemort...that he was allowed to overhear and that they were false?
So just how many people have been hurt, tortured, killed all because Dumbledore's manipulations about the true-prophecy. Its clear that he's not at all bothered who he lies to, even his own grandson...which clearly shows to me that he loves being in control and influencing with so many peoples lives. He
seems to be addicted to control people and events. I do wonder how long it will be before someone starts questioning just why they look up Dumbledore and obey without question? Will anyone else uncover the truth/or at least some of it about Dumble-dore's nasty plans?
| Griffin Raven chapter 7 . 1/7/2011
I'm surprised that during the time Dumbledore was Harry supposed magical guardian that he didn't try to access and use the Potter vaults for money to support the order in the war (or even his own personal use to keep his grandson safe)?
How was Remus able to become Harry's magical guardian as he's a werewolf...or was it because of Sirius's will? What is going on between Harry and Bella and why they always seem a little sad whenever physical contact (hug) ends?