Reviews for Twilight Plans
Louey06 chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
This was wonderful;. I never considered that remus might be an animagus too. I always assumed it was just james peter and Sirius. very nicely done I loved it soo much.
SeceretGoldenEyes chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
Awesome story - I really enjoyed reading it! I cant believe it only has 9 reviews! :O

This whole story was clearly very well thought out and well written, plus great ideas - I loved the idea that Remus is also an animagus! The whole process of learning to become animagi is really cleverly described, and your portrayal of the characters (especially Sirius and Remus) was perfect. I congradulate you on writing this fic :)
ZedPM chapter 1 . 2/16/2009

I don't know how you come up with this stuff, but that was amazingly detailed, fantasitcally played out and altogether one of my favourite fanfictions ever. XD

(btw - "Ancient, Inbred, and Immoral House of Black" - brilliant!)

Kralia chapter 1 . 6/27/2006
This is really good. I especially liked the Pied Piper bit. But... since when is Remus an Animagus? I'm pretty sure he says in POA there were three unregistered Animagi running around, not four.

But yeah, good. Kudos.
kalathetrumpeter chapter 1 . 5/7/2006
Wow. I'm glad someone finally explored the mechanics of becoming an Animagus. Good job.
knowregrets chapter 1 . 4/7/2006
I really like this. You have presented a really interesting, and realistic, portrait of the animagus transformation.

It makes a refreshing change to read a Marauders story that isn't about constantly pulling pranks. You show them all as real, complex, people. The benefits of a story not written by a thirteen year old is that you get characters with depth, and you have shown that.
Llassah chapter 1 . 11/8/2005
For such a bloody epic, this fic really does deserve more reviews than it's getting. An incredible peice of writing, you've clearly put a great deal of thought into the animagi transformation, both theoretically and psycologically. This is really amazing, I can't praise it enough, and with the amount of work you put into it, it deserves more recognition than this. I shall recommend it on fictionalley
FizzerV chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
That was pretty darn good, if I say so myself! I was afraid this might've been like that story where Harry turned into a white tiger and got impregnated by Draco, or something, but I was pleasantly surprised. This story stuck very closely to canon, and the characters acted exactly how they should've and weren't out of character at all. Keep up the great work.
AchillesMonkey chapter 1 . 8/12/2005
Wow. Very good take on that. It's awesome. I'm adding it to my favs.
Julia chapter 1 . 4/25/2005
Wow! That blew me away! Amazing all around especially the detail and vivid imagery. I have two minor criticisms: First I feel like after all the research he did Sirius’s sensory changes should have been less shocking. Second, the nicknames Moony and Prongs came naturally but Padfoot and Wormtail felt forced. Maybe they wouldn’t have been created until after their first run and Peter’s tail proved its usefulness.

I would LOVE to read the “Marauders' first full moon escapade”. Please Post it soon!
Mrs. Fawkes chapter 1 . 4/14/2005
I'm so happy you've gotten this work up! I love it! But I assume I should go into a bit more detail then just gushing about how great it is.

Remus forging McGonagall's signature to get into the restricted section of the library is great. I love how you describe the wear and tear that the boys have put on the book. I have a great mental picture of it in my mind.

After reading the tidbit that you sent me, I have to laugh at James and his simplistic idea of "say a spell as we’re falling asleep, and presto—we eventually dream of the animal we are and why." Also the comment that the 'rightness' is going to just, "whack us round the head with it" was great.

I am so glad that i got to read the actual dream from Remus' point of view. It really added something to the story to really know what James (well, for all of them)

"Ancient, Inbred, and Immoral House of Black" I had to read that twice before it sunk it what it was saying. And when I got it, heheheheh, my silent joke of the day.

I really like how you arrived at the nickname 'Moony', it was just spontaneous, nothing long and drawn out about it; it just fit. (The same with James)

It fits that Peter, wanting to keep up with the others, would force himself to transform.

"And the only story that really involves rats is that one about the Pied Piper."

"That’s true," James says ruefully. "And we hardly want to name you after a fiend like that, who put a Suggestibility Jinx on all those rats to lure them out and then was mad enough to cast the Imperius Curse on children to abduct them just because he wasn’t paid."

"The Muggle version is nicer," Remus mutters absently." Hehehehe, I love all the little things like that in this story that just make you laugh.

As always you do a great job and I think I must name this piece my favorite of all time.

I hope you go on to the first full moon together.

(Must get back to schoolwork. I saw your e-mail right before I was leaving this morning and when I found the first excuse to get to a computer at school I took it. :-P)

Mrs. Fawkes~