Reviews for Captain, My Captain
jcampbellohten chapter 1 . 5/14/2016
If it's from Renji's point of view, I would expect him to never think of himself as "Abarai" and to think of Byakuya as "Kuchiki-taichou," not by his given name. Also, from the very beginning Byakuya consistently calls Renji "Renji," not "Abarai-kun."
When Renji enters the office, it's stated that Byakuya's on the floor behind his writing desk, but then it's stated that he joins Renji on the floor. I'm confused, because the second statement implies he was standing and there was no indication that he stood. I also don't see why Byakuya would realistically feel the need to kow-tow to give a thank you for anything to anyone, even for protecting his beloved sister. He might bow a little or maybe just incline his head, but I don't think anything justifies a positively servile position as he takes here.
Other than the kow-towing, I like the concept of using their professional closeness as an opportunity for character study.
Pixychick84 chapter 1 . 3/28/2014
Awwww :)
KaKashiisWifey chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
awww lml i absolutely love these two as friends! we need more fics like this in the archive xD
magdilen chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
Great job. Great characterization.
Coollizard chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
Love it! The writing's great, and the story really has a good flow to it. Also, I'd say the OOC warning was unnecessary. Byakuya is always hard to characterize, but personally, I thought you did an excellent job of keeping everyone in character. I'm looking forwards to reading more of your stories! _
Renn chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
It's amazing how you manage to keep true to the series' spirit! The fics are funny and in character, they're a real pleasure to read!
LeVaire chapter 1 . 10/12/2009
LOL! This fanfic really just made me go "Aw!"

"I like tempura". Hahaha! Nice fanfic :D
skele-gro chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
Ell Bee Someone Else Now chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
"Byakuya was even more socially retarded than he was." Ah, Renji, the things you teach us ... you big moron. Good stuff, good stuff, well up to the author's usual standards.
abls chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
I need more fics of these two!
0mohni0 chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
I usually like Byakuya/Renji as a pairing, but this was well written.
Sakura Lucy Li chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
I always wondered how the days after the incident would be. Now, I think I know, thanks to you.

Domo Arigatou Gozaimashita!

I will read the others 2 fanfictions about them now.

Matta ne!
Kazima Kuwabara chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
i really enjoyed this. What a great way to show their relationship.
iced.moon chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
LOL Bya-kun is DEFINETLY socially retarded!
Shavaineth chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
*snickers* Byakuya's more socially retarded than Renji. Nice one liner. :-)
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