Reviews for What is us ?
navycorpsman chapter 1 . 4/3/2006
It definately defines the relationship of Ray and Neela. VERY GOOD! :)
FreeingAlys chapter 1 . 5/20/2005
very good. yes, a little random, but i think that it still worked. can't wait to see what you write next.
funkycool chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
its random but it describes the relationship well. it was really good, very bold and effect kinda thing.
AshCarroll aka ShadowDiva chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
It might be random, but I think it works. It describes the relationship very well, I think. Looking forward to reading the next thing you write. :)