Reviews for When A House Is Merely A Prison
beauty0102 chapter 9 . 8/30/2010
great story.
Goth with Caitie chapter 5 . 4/27/2007
It would be eaiser with Caitie cause Caitie hangs out with him in his room when he isn't on call.
gothiac chapter 1 . 12/22/2006
i really
angry penguin chapter 9 . 11/27/2006
Well done.
Neonex chapter 4 . 3/30/2006
I do not know if you are still reading the reviews, BUT actually the police do not need Jamie's permission to press charges. If he is a minor then it is child abuse, and if a child life is endangered the police have a right, obligation and the law on their side to remove the child from their home. A person is considered a minor until they reach their 18th birthday, so unless Jamie is 18, it IS child abuse.
Jessie13 chapter 9 . 6/5/2005
great story. keep up the good work.
MysticWilderness chapter 9 . 5/24/2005
Aw, this was a really good story. I can't wait to see what other stuff you come up with
Lexcial chapter 9 . 4/24/2005
I love it. It was awesome. The ending was soo sweet. can't wait to see your next story.
Lexical chapter 7 . 4/23/2005
good job I can't wait to read the end of the story but update sooner I waited like a week the last time and i really want to know what happens
Lexical chapter 6 . 4/19/2005
Hey that was really good just be sure to watch your punctuation so you don't get your readers confused. I can't wait for an update! great chapter!
lexical chapter 5 . 4/17/2005
okay that was pretty good. For Val finding out you could have them like walking down a hallway or something like that, and she trips. he goes to catch her and when he does he screams in pain etc. just a suggestion keep up the good work
Montana Magic chapter 4 . 4/16/2005
Actually, Jamie's reaction to the police seems logical to me. So good going with that. If the English teacher you're asking about is that one the Caitie and Val had for the writing contest then her name is Mrs. Persinger, but keep your character. There can be more than one English teacher. :) Keep it up