Reviews for Return to Innocence
AnimeLover chapter 3 . 12/31/2013
I love this story so soooooooo much. The way you planned out the plot was amazing. I was nearly crying. ;_; ... I should've clicked on this page when I first saw it. Enough of my ranting. Anyway, looking forward to reading more of you're stories :D
silverstargazer chapter 3 . 3/27/2013
The grammar... It has flaws. But hands down on the plot. Really.
Black Bart Lady chapter 3 . 9/8/2012
This. Was. Awesome.
ali-jae chapter 3 . 7/10/2012
omg this story was sooooo good! very well written coming to the point that i was crying and i like the small 'temari and shikamaru' thing you had in the second chapter. :)) omg too good, you are amazing like the word amazing doesnt even cut it anymore
kuromimi chapter 3 . 5/31/2012
A nice story, after reading over a hundred fanfics there is absolutely ONE thing they have in common, ALWAYS trust, SHIKAMARU. LOL he's ALWAYS right.

Neji and Tenten's part was more heart throbbing and SasuSaku's was more comedic in my interpretation. I had a major face palm when i read what Sasuke did on that first chapter!
naash chapter 3 . 4/27/2011
so beautiful. again this is so well written my pathetic words is not enough to even tell you how good it is.

i love the ending. i lvoe how everythings not rushed yet everything happened within a day or a few hours.

i love how i dont hate any character. everyone is just unsure and trying to move with the motions yet theyre sure of who they love.

i think you thought of this as a romance but i think of this as angst with a really happy ending.

youre a great writer and i bet a lot of people say that

its going to my faves

naash
naash chapter 2 . 4/27/2011
this is so well written. did i tell you that already?

seriously tenten and lee is so branve to go back. i mean who would want to see the people they love get married. and i love how tenten wants a hug. just a hug. my god thats so heart breaking

naash
naash chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
so heartbreaking. this story is really so well writeen. the dialogue flows nicely. you describe everything perfectly and everyones in character. amazing
grunty07 chapter 3 . 4/2/2011
That was good. A little bit on the cheesy side in the beginning. Well, for me, at least. But the last chapter made up for any of that. Glad to see it all worked out.
RD-chan hokage chapter 3 . 12/11/2010
awww! that was so sweet! :)
Nanannacyy chapter 3 . 6/1/2010
well there were lots of twists and turveys but hey it all worked out in the end so yayay ;D
SynysterVamp chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
So...Depressing...yet really good o.0 lol
sonia chapter 3 . 6/13/2009
so sweet!

Thanks!
sixpacksofcigarettes chapter 3 . 10/28/2008
there were a few problems with the grammar but it was pretty gd. i like how it ended. how sakura said that sasuke couldn't get rid of her that easily. sweet. (:
Chocolate and caramel chapter 3 . 10/2/2008
It...Soo...Swet!
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