Reviews for Together Forever
tanithlipsky chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
reader chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
It was wonderful!
maireadnesbitt chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
Oh my gosh!This was incredibly well done.I could never do anything like this.I absoutly love your oneshot writing them!

gnomex chapter 1 . 8/3/2006
Yes, it was very good. Enjoyable read, off to read the next one now...GGx
ZedPM chapter 1 . 5/29/2006
aww! thats happy, but sad at the same time if you no wot i mean!
xXx r a i z a xXx chapter 1 . 8/28/2005
cute, fluffy! i love these
TeresaBlackPotter chapter 1 . 6/15/2005
It's beautiful and quite funny! I love the part when Harry grabs some snow and smashed it on Sirius's face! it's hilarious (SP?) I wish this fic had more chapters.
oxymoronique chapter 1 . 6/8/2005
nicely done...

love the part where James fell and Harry .

write more nice stories.

remember to update Prongs ride again.

Lady Taliesin chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
Gah! I thought I'd reviewed this already...apparently not...sorry!

So, what to say...I loved it, don't know why you think it is isn't good. I thought it was really, really cute ) favorite part would have to be when Padfoot comes bounding out of the trees. Hehe, I love Sirius...and Remus too, for that matter, but seeing as how he's not in the story it'd probably be unforgivably off topic to ramble on about him.

But I do love Remmie. He's scrumdiddlyumptious.

ANYWAYS - my other favorite part would have to be when James did his little twirl thing and landed on his back. HAH! That was great. D

So, yeah. I loved it, and sorry I didn't review sooner )


-Lady Taliesin
Crazy-Physco chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
Tiontah chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
Plot-It was really good, really sweet, but also really sad. They had a perfect life and Voldemort shattered it.

Writing-Very well-writen. You did a good job of going back and forth from James & Lily to Sirius & Harry.

Overall- 9 out of 10
HarrysGrrl chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
aw... this was very cute and sweet! i love babies! of course it's good! why would you think it wasnt... this was a sweet memory! until next saturday!
supernova8610 chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
Aw! I thought this was very good!
RSegovia chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
Cute story, but a few weird things:

"She loved Harry. There was nothing to hate about him." Why would there be? What's the point of this sentence?

"The amount of snow that had fallen had caused it to freeze over." Um, freezing temperatures at water level cause lakes to freeze over. Not the amount of snow.

Also there are a few weird sentences as far as word choice and sentence structure, but I like the story!
IamSiriusgrl chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
That's so sweet! Lots of cute fluff! I love it!
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