Reviews for Illusions of the Mind
Vamp.Michelle chapter 8 . 3/13/2009
Ah, I'm glad everything turned out all right in the end!

I can't help it, but the showdown at the Stone of Erech felt somewhat Buffy-ish to me. I can't even pinpoint why, but it sort of had a Buffy-feel to it. Which, of course, can never be a bad thing:)
Slayer3 chapter 8 . 1/28/2009
Aww how sweet...YAY Estel and Legolas...Poor Arwen..seriously someone needs to like invent duct tape and like duct them both to a pole in Lorien lol

Slayer,the compltely obsessed fangirl

IMSGSET and Sue Squad member
asdfjkl chapter 2 . 1/22/2009
i just wanted to quickly say, thank you for using the phrase 'hurts like anything.' thank you! i use it all the time but i don't know anyone else who does.
isilme222 chapter 8 . 1/4/2009
Thank you so much for finishing this wonderful fic.

Wolf Jade chapter 8 . 1/4/2009
I thought my eyes were deceiving me when I saw the author alert in my inbox. I'm glad you came back to finish this story. And it was an amazing last chapter and a good end to the sequel. Great job.
isilme222 chapter 7 . 12/1/2007
please update if you are able, as i have missed this fic.

fishpaste chapter 7 . 8/27/2007
Wow. these stories are so interesting. i love the two of them. i think the best bit about them is definatly the aragorn torture, i love having him in pain! now that sounded really brutal.
KsandraMallan chapter 7 . 1/9/2007
Wow. I absolutely adore this sequel... poor old Estel. He certainly *does* take a lot of abuse, doesn't he? Glad to see Legolas is back on his feet... sort of...
snow6835 chapter 7 . 4/22/2006
please update soon! you just HAVE to finish this story!
Snowglory chapter 7 . 4/2/2006
Oh I hope at some point that you will finish this story... it begs to be finished... also... I am sure I was emailed, but I can't remember but is Linuvial okay? she kind of disappeared...

Update soon please

retrokitten87 chapter 7 . 2/7/2006
Nice chapter... hehe, possession is always interesting. Can't wait for your next chapter!
grumpy123 chapter 7 . 2/4/2006
Well that was a very exicting chapter. Very smart of Elrond to give it to Aragorn. Poor Legolas to be a healer by proxy.
Aranna Undomiel chapter 7 . 2/2/2006
Geesh, this was a really weird, creepy, unbelievably strange and yet really great chapter..LOL

Glad everyone came out allright :)
Slayer3 chapter 7 . 1/30/2006
WOOT WOOT!FINNALLY! that bastage got what he deserved...*evil grin...poor Estel...poor all of them...

Slayer,the completly obsessed fangirl

IMSGSET and Sue Squad member
Lyn chapter 2 . 1/29/2006

Just one suggestion:

Swearing loudly, he jumped away from the window just moments before a sword sang through the air where his head had been just moments before.

"just moments before" is repeated, probably because two

thoughts about how to type the sentence banged heads

together. Think the sentence would best be:

"Swearing loudly, he jumped away from the window

before a sword sang through the air where his head

had been just moments before."

Also, any research you can do into injuries, the

treatment for them, and the future consequences

would greatly aid your story.

In particular, I was

thinking of the broken arm that had healed improperly.

When a bone breaks, it can be a clean break without

misalignment, a clean break with misalignment, or

a fragmented one where bits of bone are embedded in

the muscles (ouch). If it was a clean break with

misalignment, the healing process would involve new

bone being formed but not in a good way...there

would most likely be a big knot of bone, so when

Aragorn decided to rebreak the bone and realign it,

that might not have worked. The knot of bone would

have broken into pieces.

I'm not a doctor or a surgeon. It would be nice if

you had one to consult-that would make you the

best writer on The best advice I

can give is to research, and CHOOSE which injuries

your characters receive. There can be lots of

injuries that do not leave deformities or disabilities

or even death as the consequences. One should

keep treatments reasonably close to what would be

available in such a culture.

Oh..don't have anyone give liquids or food to anyone

unconscious. The liquid would go into the lungs because

the tiny flap of tissue that covers the trachea (air way) when swallowing while alert is useless when one is

not awake, so the trachea (which is situated just in

front of the esophagus)will receive some of the liquid.

I heard one fan fic author made a "leather tube" to

introduce fluids to unconscious people, but I don't

think that was wise! Hospitals use plastic tubes which are introduced through the nose. Sometimes inexperienced

people can accidentally get them into the trachea

even then! Hospitals can't be compared with

wilderness medical care, SO it's much easier to

construct a story where that isn't a problem.

Thank you for sharing your outstanding talent as a

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