Wait! What happens?

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I really liked your portrayal of Kaoru in this story - her playfulness is really fun and I enjoyed exploring her world in here through everything but sight. Especially when setting a scene is so vital in a story, more description (usually) the better. So kudos to you for describing so much with all the other senses that usually get lost along the way.

Sweeeeeeeeet read. 8D

Should have written a review/favorited this story ages ago when I first read it so that I could go back and reread without having to rediscover. (lol that was a godawful sentence but I'm too lazy to edit that.)

I like how this story just gets straight to the point... in a way. There was no reason to explain the "accident" or Battosai or the war or any other type of miscellaneous background information that might have been useful, but in retrospect was unnecessary. I enjoy it better that way; I don't have to figure out what's going on when there are plot holes in the story.

Kenshin is SUCH a gentleman; you really portrayed him well and kept him in character (in my opinion.) :D

Beautiful. Stunning. Wonderful.

'Nuf said.

Yukiona.

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So Good. Your writing is vivid, witty, and captivating; your writing breathes. I love Kaoru in this. Just so well-written.

i really love this kenshin..

So good! You gave Kenshin's character an intensity and sort of patience that really made him perfect. And Kaoru's sarcastic confidence yet vulnerable nature was also really well done! I always love your paranormal or supernatural Kenshin fics. They are always really well done and so great to read! Thanks! :D

Absolutely sexy :D Me likey!

this is lovely story I adore this

Excelent story! Good work!

...i really like this one...

Well written, only spotted two grammer error(well one was a spelling error.) Good description of a newly blind person.

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omgosh! this story is so good! _