Reviews for An Apple a Day
OasisSerenity chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
This story is so cute! Neji was such a sweet heart by giving Tenten an apple a day, kissing her forehead every night, and staying by her side the whole time. I love how in the end Neji got sick because he kissed Tenten on the lips. Too adorable!
Kratos Wilder chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
Bahahaha! Oh, Lee and Gai are going to bring about my death. Surely after laughing at them for so long, something would rupture!

I LOVE the story! I laughed throughout the whole thing! And as much as I love Neji and Tenten fluff, I absolutely loved the humor! Very well done!
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
Great story
Shubhs chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
How sweet! :3

:D

I LOVE these one shots that have these super-awesome, super-cute interludes! :D
Ekun-Asha chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
Mmm...

Rich in vitamins too!
Rainbowed-Sunned-Spirit chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
Awww, that was so sweet! I loved it! I especially loved Lee and Gai in this story! They made me LOL. Haha, when Neji got sick at the end XD

Anywhoo, great job!
math music reading chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
That was hilarious! i love your writing.
Sabry chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
Oh, that was so romantic please continue! :)
pkstarstorm chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
OH WOW THAT WAS SO SWEET WOULD U MIND IF I MIGHT POSSIBLY CONTINUE THIS AT SOME POINT WHEN I HAVE TIME?
xXkickass-kunoichiXx chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
Way cool!
Mizu no Kenshi chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
That was so cute! I loved the apple parts.
NoxWillow chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
aw that was so cute! make more!
stop reading my pen name chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
:D im going to eat apples now lots and lots of apples :P

anyway very cute one-shot well written and very original it made me smile the entire time i was reading it i was like :)
An-Jelly-Ca chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
She never even made it past Neji. Upon seeing her falter, the Hyuuga promptly extended an arm just in time to keep her from eating dirt-and didn’t even blink. He was just that cool.

“I believe you overdid it on the youth.” Whether he was addressing Tenten or Gai was never clarified.

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“The youthful enthusiasm of Tenten will triumph!” Gai told the blank-faced Neji and the watery-eyed Lee. “Her devotion for her team has made her work herself into a high state of exhaustion, but her fever’s low. Put simply, our blooming teammate has a bad cold!” He then struck Good Guy Pose #73 (which was only slightly less scary than Good Guy Pose #48, in Neji’s opinion). “But worry not! Our new mission is to nurse our fallen kunoichi back to health, 110!”

He didn’t know if it was out of concern for Tenten’s sanity or his own urge to get out of this ridiculous mission, but SOMETHING prompted Neji to try and prevent this from progressing.

Aww, NejiTen cuteness! Fantastic story it was absolutely hysterical, the parts with Gai and Lee had me cracking up.
Sairalinde Inwe chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
Yes...man I have a really bad craving for an apple right now...

This was great, the NejiTen fluff was perfectly balanced and beautifully written. Awesome work with this. I love the ending...aw...so cute...

Saira
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