|Reviews for Soul Catchers|
| TheStrangeZora chapter 4 . 2/19
Reading again, still very professional! I think this book should have more views!
| TheStrangeZora chapter 9 . 2/17
This is a MASTERPIECE. I would read the entire thing! Your writing is very clear and flows well, the story's concept is original and I just find this story creative and original! Keep it up!
| RangerJacksonPotter123 chapter 9 . 3/31/2016
Plz update this is awesome. So good. Don't leave us hanging... Plz update wherever possible
| BlueManiac359 chapter 9 . 2/10/2015
Good fanfiction can't wait for the update. Plz don't leave this good story to be forgotten.
| Samansa-chan147 chapter 9 . 7/25/2014
Please update this story is amazing and I truly can't wait for the next chapter to come
| Guest chapter 9 . 8/28/2013
Hope you continue this story!
| Guest chapter 9 . 8/15/2013
Love this story! Can't wait till you post the next chapter!
| Pink Fire Starter chapter 9 . 3/8/2012
Wow. I adore finding stories like this. The concept is great and so far, I HAVE to be there for what happens next. What really sells it to me is your portrayal of the characters. They are very much alive and human. I applaud you for this. Please continue this wonderful piece of work.
| randomnobody chapter 9 . 12/13/2011
I really like this story, Soul Catchers, and the other day I came to realize that I have been waiting for an update for almost three years now. I understand that there is likely a very good reason why you stopped writing, but what I would very much like to know is this; is there any hope that you will continue writing this story?
With hope for the life of this story, and always waiting for an update,
| TyrantChimera chapter 9 . 8/23/2010
I love your fics! You have the occasional problems with spelling or misused words, but it doesn't really distract from these great stories you have! Keep it up!
| Imgonenowgoodbye12345 chapter 9 . 9/28/2009
Beware of the long review! :D
First of all, it's interesting. Very interesting. You're pretty good at hooking the reader and making him (or in my case, her) read it! Kudos to you for that! :D
For the most part, I'm loving your characterization. You have Zelda and Ruto and Darunia and Impa and the rest of the sages and especially Nabooru just spot-on. Especially Nabooru; she's so in character it's scary :D. However, I'm not too sure about Link...you gave him a bit of an attitude and I always thought he was more the strong, silent type, but that could be just me...
The plot seems very similar to the original Zelda game (wasn't it that one where Zelda broke the Triforce into eight pieces and scattered it all over Hyrule to prevent Ganondorf from finding it, or was it a different one? I never did play any of the games except Ocarina and maybe a bit of Link's Awakening *sweatdrop*). It's also very similar to InuYasha, or Tsubasa: Reservoir Chronicle, in that you have something (Shikon shard, Princess Sakura's memories, you name it) getting split into multiple pieces and an eclectic group of characters having to band together to go find it and make it whole again.
I really loved that one scene- I don't remember which chapter it was- where Link kinda becomes aware and Zelda realizes he can hear her; that he still has a bit of his soul left inside him that's been protected by the Triforce of Courage. It was just a very beautiful scene. I also like how you have an overall very good grasp of description and setting and the like.
Now, since I have a bad habit of doing so in my reviews: The critic part of the critique.
You've got some grammar and spelling issues to work out. There are a few instances when you use the wrong "your". I'm going to give some really silly examples of how to properly use it, "You're going to market?" "Your hat belongs to me now!" If it's talking about something belonging to someone, it's "your," if it's talking about something the person is or is going to do it's "you're". Also, you often use "bare" when it should be "bear." "She BARED her soul when she said she loved him"; "The journey to find Link's soul was almost too much for them to BEAR." "Bear" would be like if you have to carry a great weight or a secret, and "bare" would be if you reveal something. Also the scene where he gets his soul taken from him, you use the wrong "alter". "Alter" would be like if something was changed, like "He made alterations to his tuxedo," you should have used "altar", because that's what it was was an altar, not an alter.
Also, Zelda's dream at the beginning seemed a little wrong. I don't think Zelda's dreams were ever quite that specific; I think her dreams tended to be more vague, "Oh there was a dark cloud which symbolized Ganondorf and then there was a boy with a fairy carrying a green stone..." it was pretty vague and didn't go into the details of, "Oh no Hyrule Castle Town will be haunted by ReDeads and the Zora Domain will freeze and a dragon will take over Death Mountain and I'm gonna get kidnapped by Ganondorf!" So I don't think her dream about Link's getting his soul stolen should have been word-for-word what ended up happening.
But overall, nicely done. Please update it whenever you can :D
| no name chapter 9 . 3/1/2009
Your story is really cool, as I may have said in my other review, but I'm worry that it will become one of those stories that just sit here forever and never is updated. Please, update soon.
| Shirosenshi Kisetsu 116 chapter 9 . 2/19/2009
I love the way you use words! So poetic~
And if I was Zelda, I would be glomping Link xD
| angel680 chapter 4 . 2/15/2009
When r u going to update?please tell u DON'T have have a problem with your pc everyone i read is saying that.
| angel680 chapter 3 . 2/15/2009
I have to say I think your the best zelink fiction writer on fanfic I think it could be a real I wish they would make books for the legend of zelda.