Reviews for Could it Be?
fernnu chapter 6 . 5/3/2005 geeks rule. Well, i play the piano, so im in the orchestra. Does that count? lol. i'm not so sure anymore. Anyways i liked the chapter, Josh always was a cheater, lol. Update soon!
sehnsucht792 chapter 6 . 5/3/2005
what a nasty guy...plan something very bad to happen to him.
sehnsucht792 chapter 5 . 5/1/2005
pretty good, like the first-person narration, but you might want to brush up on your spelling and grammar. other than that, nicely done.
fanjimmy chapter 5 . 4/30/2005
Great chapters.
Talaya chapter 5 . 4/30/2005
So sad oh well.I hope the story plot go well. so far it's pretty good.
xx.xx.x.x.x.xxxx.x.x.x.x.x.x chapter 5 . 4/28/2005
Better than the last few, I could almost feel the emotions that were out and about. What's up with the ending though, just kinda left us hanging, good job and continue soon...
keriberi chapter 4 . 4/26/2005

This is a very good kp fic...and i enjoyed it very much...please continue to update...but if you dont mind i need to point out a few things...

You are leaving out words...proofreading or getting a beta to proofread for you can help this...I have trouble with this too...

When you are writing you change from past tense to present tense a lot...and you can change from present tense to past tense but you need to do it in separate paragraphs...

but overall this story is very good!

xx.xx.x.x.x.xxxx.x.x.x.x.x.x chapter 4 . 4/25/2005
Good job, it seems to get more interesting with every chapter. It now seems that the story has taken a turn toward the dark side. Before this one, it was all good and fun, but now it is starting to get dirty and serious. This story so far, is still a favorite of mine. Update soon.
Forlong chapter 3 . 4/23/2005
Lol. That's Laugh Out Loud. So funny! Especially Kim counting down the seconds 'til she could see Ron.
udontnome chapter 3 . 4/23/2005

Mutt Jeff chapter 3 . 4/22/2005
Mutt: i enjoyed your story very much. i hpoe that you will countinue to write more. I also forced Jeff to read it so he's cranky

Jeff: i am not! i just didn't care for the sappyness of the story. I'm sure this person is a very talented writed. This was just one of their off days. I hate sappy love stories!

Mutt & Jeff
KawaiiCB chapter 2 . 4/22/2005
Sestren NK chapter 2 . 4/21/2005
KimRon fluff always seems cute for some reason. Go figure. Well, keep em coming.
blader540 chapter 2 . 4/20/2005
just started reading your story...and i love it. it's great to finally know what went on during their heads while at the dance and while kissing. i'm glad you are going on with the story. keep the chapters coming please!
DragonGirl chapter 2 . 4/20/2005
YAY! 3rd chapter! WOO! great story! it'*sniff* beautiful..can't wait for the next chapter!
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