Reviews for Timeless Prey
Mikex124 chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
Saddest fanfiction EVER Pikachu you screwed up big time :(
Kiomori chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
This was so sad...bit it is amazing how this could have happened so easily. All Pikachu had to do was not attack, and there was no way they would have made it.

Was the pink creature at the end Mew?

Anyway, this was amazing, and can really be an eye-opener.
ShinigamiDeathscytheSan chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
aw poor pikachu is sad... and ash died... great job!

_BleachPhantom_

:]
Tomboy 601 chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
Ash dies and so does Pikachu. The spearow should have left them alone! Good.
I haven't joined. yet chapter 1 . 11/12/2006
Sad... yep, that's it in a nutshell. Thank God it didn't really happen...
S.A. Tsukasa chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
Wow.*Will not say more for I am still in shock-it was just that good*
Away Now chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
Oh, I saw this fiction before, but somewhere else I think. I love it, so deep and angsty...

~Kuo
KatieK3Y172 chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
That story made poke'mon look a lot better than it really is!
HeirofHoHo chapter 1 . 5/1/2005
Oh, sad, heartbreaking... I loved it. Will you continue? Please do.
dinofanatic11 chapter 1 . 4/25/2005
Pika pi! I don't get the ending...
xxx0 chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
I thought this was a pretty good fanfiction and I would like to see more in the future. I have always wondered 'what if' to everything that the Pokemon world has to offer and I hope to do some 'what ifs' also.
ImJessieTR chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
that IS sad...

Fortunately, Pikachu did save the day, but your "what if" could just as easily have happened, since Pikachu didn't really like Ash that much in the beginning.
oathk33p3r chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
oh..my...gosh.. you almost made me cry! *sniff* poor pikachu...stupid nurse joy...she kills him, right? man...that was the best one-shot i've ever read...and i'm not kidding. WRITE MORE OF THESE KINDS OF ONESHOTS PWEASE! *favs*