Reviews for Fireworks
CaptainAlias chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
This was hilarious. "Dawn (when it would be light out instead of dark)..." Was great.

At the same time it was really good job on giving it several layers.
Hummingbird2 chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
Excellent, thank you.
Mellaithwen chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
wonderfully written :)
razzle-o'dazzle chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
Really good. Beautifully written. Very powerful, and the humor added just the right touch. I liked the end alot.
doc chapter 1 . 11/28/2006
Very nice. It doesn't seem that way, but there's something very sad about this story, even with the humor.
silmirof4077 chapter 1 . 7/3/2005
Wooho ! Nice story. My only glich with it is that hawk should be a litle bit more sarcastic . Apart from that it was great. ngh!
Skywise chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
Wow can't believe no one has commented on this story. I really enjoyed reading this, the ending was perfect. You wrote this wonderfully...just great.