|Reviews for Riding On The Wild Side|
| Rodent2000XD chapter 2 . 10/8/2013
| sivchik101 chapter 1 . 4/27/2006
this is FAB writing... i could actually see the entire episode happening, including added nostril flaring :-) this is excellen writing.
| Briticism chapter 1 . 9/3/2005
so... are we going to get the next chapter soon? Though i probably am the last one who's allowed to ask that lol.
Yours is very good. Keep going please!
| JoJo chapter 2 . 6/29/2005
Oh, please keep going . . .
| Julie Ann Pope chapter 2 . 6/18/2005
Fantastic, more and more intruiging and exciting. Please, please continue, i want to know what happens next.
| Elf chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
This is great, you have the voices just right.
I can't wait to see what disasters you have planned for them all!
Please continue, this story reads so well.
| Kanna-Ophelia chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
Gorgeous and wondermous and fabulous. This really does read like an episode. Everyone is surreally in-character.
| zephine chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
This is enjoyable so far!
Would I be right in assuming some kind of Brittas-caused disaster is looming?
I'm looking forward to reading more :)
| startanew chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
oo yay! :D Hope you continue it. It's very very very good.
| strange1 chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
hehe. fun seems to be ahead for them. not! but that means fun times for us. can't wait for more. nice beginning.
| DemonicAngelic chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
Sounds fun so far. No if this is a romance story, and it involves a little love story between Laura and Brittas...then can I shake your hand?
Thanks. I LOVE reading L/B. There's definitely not enough of it out there.
One criticism I CAN offer though, is this supposed to be a script or a story? It's leaning towards the former and consequently is a little difficult to read and follow. I'd concentrate a bit more on setting a scene. Your dialogue is good and in character though.