Reviews for The Cleverness of a Ninja
Mad Hattress Skylar chapter 1 . 12/22/2005
OMG Hahahaha THat was OMG hahahaha Great hahaha
Moonraker One chapter 1 . 12/13/2005
Nice one-shot. I especially like the perverted use of henge no jutsu. As for your writing, the way you limit detail to only the important stuff is okay for a short piece like this, where you aren't aiming for a lot of imagery. If this had been a STORY, however, I'd have criticized your lack of detail.

But good job!
EffulgentInara chapter 1 . 11/30/2005
Makes me wonder about Naruto's proclamation of having learned all-new perverted jutsu ;)
Mimi Dear chapter 1 . 10/19/2005
whiskysours chapter 1 . 9/3/2005
OMG Jiraiya is so perverted! Lol!
Udyjay chapter 1 . 8/24/2005
XD EWW! Fucking Jiraiya. Good story. xD
Kurenai no Chinoumi chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
ROFL That's so funny. Bras are kinda annoying though. lol Bad Jiraiya! Keep up the great work!
psychedelic aya chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
*falls to the floor*

Omigosh. That was so funny! XDXDXDXD!
Razia chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
...more distubingness! yeah, 'm a prude. That's clever though. On jiraya's part I mean.

good imagination, good writing, goodness.
sna chapter 1 . 5/9/2005
hahahaahahahahahahah! I nearly die! Go go Jiraiya! And kick ass Tsunade. :) A rockin' one-shot! Well done.
MKRA chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
That is most defintely something that Jiraiyi would do. Poor Tsunade! Anyway, I love this to bits!

esther chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
(finally getting breath back after laughing self senseless)


sheer genius. i bow before you.

i mean, just, whoa, i mean, WHOA!

and then i thought it was over, then POW! with the last few sentences and i fell off my chair again.

omgness, please, if possible, come up wih another one...

again, sheer genius. hats off.
red.junko chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
RESCUExMe chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
Lol! Hahaha. That was great! Funnie. I liked it bras ARE annoying. LoL. go tsunade! xD
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