Reviews for Torchic's Foe
EagleFox chapter 1 . 5/27/2005
You got the names mixed up. Yuuki is the boy and Haruka is the girl. Yuuki (Brendan) has ruby red eyes and Haruka (May) has sapphire blue eyes. Okay? But not a bad story you got there. A couple of adjustment here and there and I might add it to my favorites list.
Luna Tiger chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
O.o Well, no. Yuuki is the name of the boy in RuSa, and Haruka is the name of the girl. Still, it's not too bad of a start. Not too much my cup of tea though.