Reviews for A Father's Thoughts
emily chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
so where is videl at during this fic?
kate chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
so where is videl at in this story?
TennisPirate chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
Wow, Trunks is a jerk. That's not cool.

You're a terrific writer! I love it when people have good grammar and spelling. It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. There is hope for the English language!

Good story, but short — kind of nothing happens.

How old are they, out of curiosity?


- I am the Tennis Pirate
yuki san1 chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
And here I am once again! Reviewing my own story to boost my self esteam. -sighs- Oh well, I hope you guys like this story, even though it's more like a one-shot. If anybody has read any good Trunks/Pan in a while... review me and let me know please!