Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant

Oh so Bellatrix. You capture her perfectly.

Suitable creepy...excellent characterisation of one of my favourite characters. It was short... but I still shivered at some of the creepier paragraphs.

Excellent Job!

was that balatixs or how ever u spell her name

dark.i likey!i espesialy(sp?)likey the thing about mudblood deaths amd cursin aurours an muggles being fed 2 the dementors kiss!vdark.u kno u realy shuld have a publishing contract by now your realy that good!i wish i could write like only ever good at illustrating an poetry !

i dont think this is as gud as slytherin tho but then again thats my fave 1 of ur stories .

if this review takes you a long time 2 read as this is 1 of or the longest review i have ever written.

(at least on

-megz-

:P

pps;then again it probbably wont coz ur a fast im rambling again!

mj

Wow... that's scary. It's really good. It's very unnerving and chilly. Wow. Nicely written - you've got a lot in uch a few words. Is this Bellatrix? I wouldn't have thought it would Crouch, he wasn't in there long enough for this, and the boy in the penseive didn't seem... strong enough, cold enough.

Dark, twisted, and so very very Bella.

Very nice, a little insight into the mind of the coolest damn Death eater is Voldemort's service, bravo.

Skull Bearer.

That's Bella, isn't it? "That pitiful Auror and his wife" - the Longbottoms, I suppose.

This is well written, especially the repeated mentioning of her "sanity" and faith made this piece intense.

You are surely talented as a writer! (At least judging from this chap). Please update soon!