Lovely. In character. Good dialogue. I adore the opening paragraph, and the concept.

I like these two bits so far and can't wait to see more. You've captured their personalities very well, and it seems very natural how they act and what they say. Very nice.

Cute in an eerie way. These are a nice length, by the way.

I've never before heard pf this pairing, and I'm eager to try it! Yay, something non-crappy-inu-kag-ish! This one was cool, though I don't think you had Kagura's character down quite. Good job though. The italics at the begginning worked well.

Hope To See More _;